Still water

May share my taste now
Some still water from my mouth in ur’s
Parting the coveted rose petals
With a deep trust closing the doors

I want to do to you
What the autumn does to the trees
wake ur goose-bumps
lick some still water from ur limbs and leaves

suck each-others sole, the greatest lust
we both knew the desire right from the start
irony my love, is that theirs still water
it’ll find your eyes if I don’t keep it to my heart

 

sum very very.>dEep WoRds.> really very very nice,..


i think u hav hit the love road many times.... deep meanings .


suck each-others sole, the greatest lust
we both knew the desire right from the start
irony my love, is that theirs still water
it’ll find your eyes if I don’t keep it to my heart (<<<<i love this ))

 

thanks
haha .... but no i not even frequently
the two more connotations i assocaite still water are worthlessness and that it withers (taste, colour even smell )....if u get time do read with these conntotations even !!

thanks again

 

I want to do to you
What the autumn does to the trees


Make him wither and die?

 

thanks for the comment anuradha ..actuaaly if u see autmn helps the regrowth, lets the old fall away takes the life ( green leaves) and gives birth to new petals ....mark the words i perposely didnt write ..."waht the autumn did to the trees" i wrote it to make the overall in totality affect....hope i qualified !

and how did u find the poem "overall" ..plz put ur comments..