Still water

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Oct 10, 2009.

  1. May share my taste now
    Some still water from my mouth in ur’s
    Parting the coveted rose petals
    With a deep trust closing the doors

    I want to do to you
    What the autumn does to the trees
    wake ur goose-bumps
    lick some still water from ur limbs and leaves

    suck each-others sole, the greatest lust
    we both knew the desire right from the start
    irony my love, is that theirs still water
    it’ll find your eyes if I don’t keep it to my heart
     
  2. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    sum very very.>dEep WoRds.> really very very nice,..


    i think u hav hit the love road many times.... deep meanings .


    suck each-others sole, the greatest lust
    we both knew the desire right from the start
    irony my love, is that theirs still water
    it’ll find your eyes if I don’t keep it to my heart (<<<<i love this ))
     
  3. thanks
    haha .... but no i not even frequently
    the two more connotations i assocaite still water are worthlessness and that it withers (taste, colour even smell )....if u get time do read with these conntotations even !!

    thanks again
     
  4. andhura

    andhura New Member

    I want to do to you
    What the autumn does to the trees


    Make him wither and die?
     
  5. thanks for the comment anuradha ..actuaaly if u see autmn helps the regrowth, lets the old fall away takes the life ( green leaves) and gives birth to new petals ....mark the words i perposely didnt write ..."waht the autumn did to the trees" i wrote it to make the overall in totality affect....hope i qualified !

    and how did u find the poem "overall" ..plz put ur comments..
     

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