' Somewhere Without Me...! '

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Apr 13, 2012.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    It’s deep night out here…

    My mind sinks deep
    into sadness.
    Dark sky…
    Torpid houses…
    Vigil silence…

    A breeze entering
    from the window,
    slightly touches me
    and gives me a shiver…

    It’s deep night out there…

    Everything is dormant
    and among those roofs,
    she is there within…
    Somewhere without me,
    and who knows
    if she is already asleep...?

    And me not...!


    Amanush

    :)
     
  2. ...good one .. i liked the style
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    its breeezzzzyyy .. :D
    i loved it.. :)
     
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    haha,..i don't know why it made me laugh.. Maybe the contrast between the lines and the message..but lines are good...
     

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