Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Sep 22, 2005.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Deep inside
    The feeling grows
    Where I hide
    No one knows

    Again and again I die
    But my soul isn't set free
    I don't know why
    But something won't let me be

    It hurts in a way
    Unlike ever before
    I can't even say
    That it's pain for sure

    My insides've become hollow
    From continuous corrosion
    As with a fake smile I swallow
    The bitter poison

    I still smile...
    Can't let them see
    Don't want their advice
    Or their sympathy

    So once again a smile I fake
    And into the crowd I disappear
    That I'll grow weaker and break
    Is my only fear...
    vini likes this.
  2. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    good one!!
    how do u get al these poems>?? ;)
  3. hate_eternal

    hate_eternal Banned

    Very nice poem. I wish I could write half as good as that.
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    well.. stuff like dat jst comes out!
  5. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Very well-written. I applaud.

    The flow of the poem(?) was superb.
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    **pats self on d back**

    thnx bjr!
  7. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    Hey cryptic angel that was good.
    And hey that signature itslef seems like a nice poem.
  8. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    yeah... d siggy is kinda a short poem i wrote...

    Garima likes this.
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    yeah.....i agree to wat Jekyll said....

    its an awesome poem....expresses a feeling that even I go thru ....most of the times...
  10. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    nice seems u've been writing for quite

    anyways reps4u
  11. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    thnx garima, vini :)

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