hi guys.. as my exams r over... now u people gonna suffer thru loads of my poetries that im gonna post here.. this one i wrote last night... shyaahi... (the ink) dard ki ranjish chubhi aankhon me.. aasuon se lipat ke woh shyaahi ban gayi.. labz kaaton ke likhe kuch aise.. dil ke kagaz pe tabaahi ban gayi.. hamnasheen thi kabhi, aaj karti hai purdhaa.. jaan se bhi kareeb thi, aaj harjaayee ban gayi.. tohamat hai aise.. dil ke saude pe.. katl kar ke begunaah woh saudaayee ban gayi.. wo bewafa hi bata de, bewafaayi ka sabab hai kaunsi humse.. laparwaahi ban gayi.. dard chubhta hai, uski rukhsaton ka ke kaaton ki chubhan bhi.. narmaayee ban gayi.. manjilon ka hua, jab tasavvur hum ko.. raaston se humaari, ruswaayi ho gayi.. mar chuka hu kab ka.. bass leta hu saanse.. ke sirf ye saanse, jindagi ki gawaahi ban gayi.. na tanhaa tha kabhi.. pehlu me usske.. aaj tanhaayi jaise..parchaai ban gayi.. woh thi to lagata tha.. sabkuch apnaa sa.. aaj parchaai bhi mujhse paraayee ban gayi.. --------------------------------------------------------- comments please...
@nemo...thanks man... @vishwaa... u produce ur own film plz... i will do lyricist job without a cost... n lead role too....lol... btw.. thanks
u wish u could have words and i wish i could have feelings to write such stuff...hahaha.....good effort ...tu vo masty vala stuff accha lukh ti hai Bahut saamaan hai dil ka, iss safar pe jaane ko kuch tum samahloo, aur kuch hum samaheleenge tum vo muskurahatoon ki tokari rakh loo gamoon ka ye baksa, hum uthaa lenge !! ......
thats awesome madhu...!! i would like to see more of ur writtings on igt so that i cud steal some of the urdu words from you.. thanks.. @nemo.. donno bout the films..but im writting lyrics for one band... i just hope for their success.. coz that wil be a milestone for my creativity too....!
yaar ,u do write some poems yaar.......hindi though...my brain gets heavy after readin hindi....but u really rock gal.......and y u doin medicine........leave it............keep writin....
the forum has seen so much of classic poetries when you were busy with your examination..now the worries are left behind........... the new topic is brilliantly crafted and moulded well with the framework of pain and suffering...the sense of appeal is awesome and it connects straight to the agonies of life... :rule: hope your imprints be never out of shyaahi....NO FALSE PRAISING FOR THE NIMI....U ROCKED WITH THIS CLASSIC TALE OF WOES.. :beer: MY REPS TO U..... rohit astroguru26
@rohit i can not count on you... btw thanks for ur genuine or imposed opinion.. u can stop bluffing now. @knight ki gf.. :nw: @abhi n hira.. u have been so good friend wit me to apreciate my each attempts.. i can not say thanks to u... coz that word is so deficient to show my feelings..
i remembered some lines on syaahi wich used to do rounds during my college dayz earlier..here they r.... likhta hu khoon se syaahi mat samajhna, pyar karta hu tumse ,bhai mat samajhna....
i wont waste my words praising coz they anyway wont be able to express the depth of my liking for ur poetry..so just>> " :nw: "
Were u inspired by da ZINDA movie song Shyaahi ?? but watever it is .. dat one is simply amazing .. :nw: .. Really loved it .. !
@rohit.... nothing to say.. @vini.. thanks very much.... too too too much... :nw: @notty.. after so much time u commented on my poem.. nice to see ur reply..thanks.. wat happened to ur resolution of keeping urself out of poems? :think:
