Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Jan 20, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    hi guys..
    as my exams r over... now u people gonna suffer thru loads of my poetries that im gonna post here..
    this one i wrote last night...

    shyaahi... (the ink)

    dard ki ranjish chubhi aankhon me..
    aasuon se lipat ke woh shyaahi ban gayi..
    labz kaaton ke likhe kuch aise..
    dil ke kagaz pe tabaahi ban gayi..

    hamnasheen thi kabhi, aaj karti hai purdhaa..
    jaan se bhi kareeb thi, aaj harjaayee ban gayi..
    tohamat hai aise.. dil ke saude pe..
    katl kar ke begunaah woh saudaayee ban gayi..

    wo bewafa hi bata de, bewafaayi ka sabab
    hai kaunsi humse.. laparwaahi ban gayi..
    dard chubhta hai, uski rukhsaton ka
    ke kaaton ki chubhan bhi.. narmaayee ban gayi..

    manjilon ka hua, jab tasavvur hum ko..
    raaston se humaari, ruswaayi ho gayi..
    mar chuka hu kab ka.. bass leta hu saanse..
    ke sirf ye saanse, jindagi ki gawaahi ban gayi..

    na tanhaa tha kabhi.. pehlu me usske..
    aaj tanhaayi jaise..parchaai ban gayi..
    woh thi to lagata tha.. sabkuch apnaa sa..
    aaj parchaai bhi mujhse paraayee ban gayi..


    comments please...
  2. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Nimisha.. one thing seriously.. u shud try in films.. even Gulzaar can't beat u...

    Hats off :beer:
  3. aysh

    aysh -|h3 ori9in4| (ui!aris-|-

    ur almost a pro ! that was lovely really ..
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @nemo...thanks man...

    @vishwaa... u produce ur own film plz... i will do lyricist job without a cost...
    n lead role btw.. thanks :cool:
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    u wish u could have words and i wish i could have feelings to write such stuff...hahaha.....good effort ...tu vo masty vala stuff accha lukh ti hai

    Bahut saamaan hai dil ka, iss safar pe jaane ko
    kuch tum samahloo, aur kuch hum samaheleenge
    tum vo muskurahatoon ki tokari rakh loo
    gamoon ka ye baksa, hum uthaa lenge !!

  6. aysh

    aysh -|h3 ori9in4| (ui!aris-|-

    yeah even i was abt to say exactly the same ... :nw:
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    thats awesome madhu...!! i would like to see more of ur writtings on igt so that i cud steal some of the urdu words from you.. thanks..

    donno bout the films..but im writting lyrics for one band...
    i just hope for their success.. coz that wil be a milestone for my creativity too....!
  8. aysh

    aysh -|h3 ori9in4| (ui!aris-|-

    thts awesome coz i think indian bands do need some good hindi/urdu lyrics ..
  9. #iR@


    another very well written poem!
  10. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    yaar ,u do write some poems yaar.......hindi brain gets heavy after readin hindi....but u really rock gal.......and y u doin medicine........leave it............keep writin....
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    whooooaaaa !! :nw:
  12. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    the forum has seen so much of classic poetries when you were busy with your the worries are left behind...........

    the new topic is brilliantly crafted and moulded well with the framework of pain and suffering...the sense of appeal is awesome and it connects straight to the agonies of life... :rule:

    hope your imprints be never out of shyaahi....NO FALSE PRAISING FOR THE NIMI....U ROCKED WITH THIS CLASSIC TALE OF WOES.. :beer:

    MY REPS TO U.....

  13. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i can not count on you...
    btw thanks for ur genuine or imposed opinion..
    u can stop bluffing now.

    @knight ki gf.. :nw:

    @abhi n hira.. u have been so good friend wit me to apreciate my each attempts..
    i can not say thanks to u... coz that word is so deficient to show my feelings..
  14. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    i remembered some lines on syaahi wich used to do rounds during my college dayz they r....

    likhta hu khoon se syaahi mat samajhna,
    pyar karta hu tumse ,bhai mat samajhna....
  15. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ^^^^^ hillarious.... :RollLol: :RollLol: :RollLol:
  16. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    trying to put my smile.....
  17. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    itna gussa..????

  18. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    i wont waste my words praising coz they anyway wont be able to express the depth of my liking for ur just>>

    " :nw: "
  19. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Were u inspired by da ZINDA movie song Shyaahi ??

    but watever it is .. dat one is simply amazing .. :nw: .. Really loved it .. !
  20. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @rohit.... nothing to say..

    @vini.. thanks very much.... too too too much... :nw:

    @notty.. after so much time u commented on my poem.. nice to see ur reply..thanks.. wat happened to ur resolution of keeping urself out of poems? :think:

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