She's so lonely tonight ...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by paranoid13rohan, Nov 1, 2006.

  1. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    She's so lonely tonight ...

    I know a girl, she's new in my town ...
    She's a 'dancing queen' and her smile's her crown.
    And when I looked in to her deep, dark eyes ...
    I found that smile's a fake 'cause sad eyes never lie.

    She's so lonely tonight ...
    She's watching the fireworks out of her window.
    She's so lonely tonight ...
    She's crying down hugging her pillow.

    Then she stands up and faces her mirror ...
    Rubs her eyes and runs her fingers through her hair.
    Trying to forget her present, oh it's so hard to bear ...
    I don't know why the truth brings her back to tears.

    She's so lonely tonight ...
    Her only friend is her own shadow.
    She's so lonely tonight ...
    That's not the girl that I've known.

    She's a 'friend of friends', but look at her tonight ...
    She can't even find an enemy or a foe to fight.
    She wants to talk to me but I don't know why she refrains ...
    What holds her from doing so? ... What's the constraint?

    She's so lonely tonight ...
    She's watching the fireworks out of her window.
    She's so lonely tonight ...
    She's crying down hugging her pillow.
    She's so lonely tonight ...
    Her only friend is her own shadow.
    She's so lonely tonight ...
    That's not the girl that I've known.




    Honest comments invited ...
    Thank You.
    Rohan.​
     
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  2. himika9

    himika9 !!!WANNA B ROCKSTAR!!!

    nice poem rohan...reminds me of me a while ago...lol!!reps!
     
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    i kinda like it :)
     
  4. crazy_keys

    crazy_keys New Member

    Osadharon hoyechhe...khub touching man...chaliye ja...
     
  5. wow can u sing and record and upload so that i can here this song...and ofcourse the lyrics are beautiful..
     
  6. pushedaway

    pushedaway New Member

    I could've asked you to allow me to sing this song with my band but, unfortunately, it is a dark song(Which is good) but i think the chorus part needs a little ammendment, that's what i think because my band is Nu-Metal so as you all are pretty aware of this genre, it's got to be a little more painful(only the chorus parts as far as this song is concerned). However, this is so fine. Nice work!
     
  7. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    thank u all 4 ur responses ... any1 wants 2 compose this & sing can do so ... i wrote it 4 someone ... n that's it ...
     
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  8. Morbid_Angel

    Morbid_Angel Sid the sloth

    Yo rohan long time. Didn't know you were such a good poet too :)

    Beautiful poem dude, loved it. Reps
     
  9. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    now dat was something REALLY simple yet very nice... really liked it man! reading a poem from u after a LONGGGGGG time! :) good job!
     
  10. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    sahi hai biduuu...inspiring !
     
  11. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    thanx aj,hira & madhuresh ... :rock:
     
  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    reps for you
     
  13. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    nimisha ... thanx 4 d reps :)
     
  14. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    B-e-a-utiful :)
     
  15. zicky5608

    zicky5608 Power Shortage

    I think I can just take this for my english homework. :)
     
  16. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Awsome...is the word...nice imagery.


     
  17. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    thank you all again :rock:

    @walkalone ... it's not an imagery ...
     
  18. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Hey Bro, u dint get what i wanted to say imagery would mean "The ability to form mental images of things or events".Even if the poem holds true for you it is just an imagery for all the readers.

    By the way that was a compliment.

    Acrry on with the gud work.

     
  19. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    @walkalone ... thank u ... got it dude
     

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