She's so lonely tonight ... I know a girl, she's new in my town ... She's a 'dancing queen' and her smile's her crown. And when I looked in to her deep, dark eyes ... I found that smile's a fake 'cause sad eyes never lie. She's so lonely tonight ... She's watching the fireworks out of her window. She's so lonely tonight ... She's crying down hugging her pillow. Then she stands up and faces her mirror ... Rubs her eyes and runs her fingers through her hair. Trying to forget her present, oh it's so hard to bear ... I don't know why the truth brings her back to tears. She's so lonely tonight ... Her only friend is her own shadow. She's so lonely tonight ... That's not the girl that I've known. She's a 'friend of friends', but look at her tonight ... She can't even find an enemy or a foe to fight. She wants to talk to me but I don't know why she refrains ... What holds her from doing so? ... What's the constraint? She's so lonely tonight ... She's watching the fireworks out of her window. She's so lonely tonight ... She's crying down hugging her pillow. She's so lonely tonight ... Her only friend is her own shadow. She's so lonely tonight ... That's not the girl that I've known. Honest comments invited ... Thank You. Rohan.
wow can u sing and record and upload so that i can here this song...and ofcourse the lyrics are beautiful..
I could've asked you to allow me to sing this song with my band but, unfortunately, it is a dark song(Which is good) but i think the chorus part needs a little ammendment, that's what i think because my band is Nu-Metal so as you all are pretty aware of this genre, it's got to be a little more painful(only the chorus parts as far as this song is concerned). However, this is so fine. Nice work!
thank u all 4 ur responses ... any1 wants 2 compose this & sing can do so ... i wrote it 4 someone ... n that's it ...
now dat was something REALLY simple yet very nice... really liked it man! reading a poem from u after a LONGGGGGG time! good job!
Hey Bro, u dint get what i wanted to say imagery would mean "The ability to form mental images of things or events".Even if the poem holds true for you it is just an imagery for all the readers. By the way that was a compliment. Acrry on with the gud work.