' She Is With Me...! '

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., May 27, 2006.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    She Is With Me…!

    I have often divided my lunch with her.
    She knows all of my dreams,
    my ambitions, my dark days…
    Often however I don't really know
    what to tell her,
    because She puts me to uneasiness.

    There are mornings in which
    She drives me mad,
    because She is not invited,
    yet She introduces herself
    with the first lights of the dawn…
    She walks all day long by my side
    in the middle of the crowd.

    At times however I have also loved
    and desired her more than any other things
    as when gazing at the splendour of nature
    or while listening to some good music.
    She has seen me crying for an ended love,
    for some sad thoughts…
    I believe that lot of times
    She has endured pain for me.

    Once I have seen her caressing
    a dead leaf fallen on the ground…
    Another time I watched her running
    after my sighs…always silent and discreet.

    While persons in love
    are kissed and embraced,
    She is with the others...
    with those who crave for some love.
    When the world is closed out alone
    and the night is ready to knock at doors…
    She is there awaiting…
    on a pillow soaked with tears.

    At times she is beautiful as an angel,
    at times ugly as sin…
    but She is always a Lady …
    and She is called …



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  2. #iR@


    WOW!!!!!!!!! AWESOME! :rock:
  3. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    hi amanush,
    i am spellbound.
    do not know what to say?
    are you the reincarnation of shakespeare?

    i do not know who you are but god bless you whoever you are.
    you almost made my eyes wet.

  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    very well versed maza aa gaya reps added..
    At times she is beautiful as an angel,
    at times ugly as sin…
    u culd have rhymed it with some thing....phir bhi sundar aati suundar !
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    and Awesome it is!
    i was kept wondering till the last line who "She" was
    lovely lines Amanush

    Tk care
  6. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    To be honest i had to read it twice to really understand it...........and every line of ur poem made me think and wonder.
    Absolutely amazing and well written
    Kudos to you.
  7. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$


    need I say More? reps 4 u .....
  8. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    great!!! @amanush

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