Shallow Waters

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Stringster, Sep 2, 2006.

  1. Stringster

    Stringster New Member

    Hey guyz.... ma first post out...I hope u like it...;)

    ShALLoW WaTeRs

    When i look down deep inside o' me...
    i think all about wat is Reality...
    Sheer living is not thing i was sent for...
    Their is definitely something more than this to me...

    Then why why why, am i a lowdown....
    Then why why why, am i creepin...
    Then why am I , in the Shallow Waters...
    Where all i can ever dream is sleepin.... <--Some deep thinkin guyz

    Up in the air, lies my destiny...
    Soaring with the winds, looking at the sea...
    Wat a gran feelin, that would be...
    When the horizon is the only thing that you plea...

    Then why why why, am i a looser....
    Then why why why, am i seepin...
    Then why am I , in the Shallow Waters...
    Where all i can ever dream is sleepin....

    By: Stringster
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    this stuff is nice work but haphazard in nature, be composed when u compose !
     
  3. nils

    nils New Member

    whoa.... why r u so depressed buddy..... i didnt like the things u discussed in the poem, its topic.... enjoy life in every phase.

    yeah, but its not dat easy to write something like this...
     

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