hi guys... hope u guys remember me! FINALLY OVER WID MA XAMS and so back wid a poem thats simple yet something that EVERYONE can relate too... and yea like always looking fwd to ur comments! here goes... School Days First steps I took here It just seems like yesterday When I walked through these corridors Which now appear silent as we go Yelling and screaming for no reason Bugging teachers to the max Boring lectures And the yawns Some good days we all have had Blabbing for hours at the canteen Begging for money earnestly Jumping around the hallways Some good days we all have had My brains flooded with memories Memories-which we all have It all seems like yesterday And here we all stand today Signing each others uniforms As we all depart Not caring for what lays ahead Cause we all know that deep down somewhere We’ll remain in each others hearts… thx for reading
I was just going to ask you to post poems considering you're "azaad" now.. You know,you're so right..we all share the same memories..but that's what makes this poem sort of predictable..since we've all been through this.. I would've seriously liked this poem a lot but I read "Nostalgia" by Max or some1 posted just a few days back here..if you read it you'll see what I mean.. Nonetheless it was a fun read..its just that I had read something on similar lines that made this one sorta predictable..
hehe...nope..it wasnt predictable.... waise..see....all hv studied in school..i guess u 2.. ...so ..da feelin.... will b same na.....n u can easily..predict...wots comin.. ... n waise.bhi ..i hv nt read dat pehle..wala..poem..u talkin bout..... will chek out..! hey..chek my poems.!! take care.!!
^hahahahhaa... yaar nice nice... as long as u guys liked the poem... i guess ansh is new here... welcome man and thx LOADSSSSSSSss for reading... will surely chk out ur poems too! @neo... thx for replying again man! lol
hehe..that's okay...just keep posting more poems (seriously!!) now I feel like I'm spamming in your thread so I'll :dance: my way out..
^hmmmmmmmmm... well i THINK we two r the only ones here from the old days who r active in the theads!
There are so many other things we did in school to feel nostalgic about, but this poem barely made me think of school. I KNOW you can do better
OMG I've become a khadoos!!!:shock: This is really a nice poem..I have no idea what I meant by predictable..a school poem is bound to be predictable....sweet poem..I liked it!!!Keep writing!!! :dance:
^ *actually laughing* this is the SECOND time u have changed ur views regarding ma poem... hehe... and i THINK we r gonna get banned today! then u can :dance: all u want! *lame joke*
Ohhh dread the almighty mods!!(and now my chances of being banned have increased: ) Nice one #iR@..see I never went off topic:dance:...no seriously though I'm going to stop posting here..keep writing..
i agree with angel ..but jo bhi hai i can think from ur side even ...good peom purani skirt and daant main taar vo labhi chootiyaan banana baar baar......nostalgia
