School Days =)

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Jun 14, 2007.

  1. #iR@


    hi guys... hope u guys remember me! :p FINALLY OVER WID MA XAMS and so back wid a poem thats simple yet something that EVERYONE can relate too... and yea like always looking fwd to ur comments! here goes...

     School Days

    First steps I took here
    It just seems like yesterday
    When I walked through these corridors
    Which now appear silent as we go

    Yelling and screaming for no reason
    Bugging teachers to the max
    Boring lectures
    And the yawns
    Some good days we all have had

    Blabbing for hours at the canteen
    Begging for money earnestly
    Jumping around the hallways
    Some good days we all have had

    My brains flooded with memories
    Memories-which we all have
    It all seems like yesterday

    And here we all stand today
    Signing each others uniforms
    As we all depart
    Not caring for what lays ahead
    Cause we all know that deep down somewhere
    We’ll remain in each others hearts…

    thx for reading :)
    anshphenomenon likes this.
  2. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    I was just going to ask you to post poems considering you're "azaad" now..

    You know,you're so right..we all share the same memories..but that's what makes this poem sort of predictable..since we've all been through this..
    I would've seriously liked this poem a lot but I read "Nostalgia" by Max or some1 posted just a few days back here..if you read it you'll see what I mean..

    Nonetheless it was a fun read..its just that I had read something on similar lines that made this one sorta predictable..
  3. #iR@


    ^hehe... yea dats wat i had in mind wen i rote it... hehe thx for reading though... :)
  4. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    hhey....dat..was.... beautiful.. .. :( ...
    made me ...cry... (almost der.) ... ........


    take care..!!
  5. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Considering the above reply maybe it wasn't that predictable:dance:
  6. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ wasnt predictable.... waise..see....all hv studied in school..i guess u 2.. :) ..da feelin.... will b same na.....n u can easily..predict...wots comin.. :p ... n waise.bhi ..i hv nt read dat pehle..wala..poem..u talkin bout.....

    will chek out..! :)

    hey..chek my poems.!! :)

    take care.!!
  7. #iR@


    ^hahahahhaa... yaar nice nice... as long as u guys liked the poem... i guess ansh is new here... welcome man and thx LOADSSSSSSSss for reading... will surely chk out ur poems too! :)

    @neo... thx for replying again man! lol
  8. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    hehe..that's okay...just keep posting more poems (seriously!!)

    now I feel like I'm spamming in your thread so I'll :dance: my way out..
  9. #iR@


    ^hmmmmmmmmm... well i THINK we two r the only ones here from the old days who r active in the theads! :p
  10. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    There are so many other things we did in school to feel nostalgic about, but this poem barely made me think of school. I KNOW you can do better :)
  11. #iR@


    ^point! :p thx for reading though... hehe
  12. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    hmmm........... thnx.. ;) new 2.dis poetry forum..... n ... tryin 2 write.. :)

    cya.!! keep posting.!!
  13. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    OMG I've become a khadoos!!!:shock:

    This is really a nice poem..I have no idea what I meant by predictable..a school poem is bound to be predictable....sweet poem..I liked it!!!Keep writing!!!

  14. #iR@


    ^ *actually laughing* this is the SECOND time u have changed ur views regarding ma poem... hehe... and i THINK we r gonna get banned today! then u can :dance: all u want! :p *lame joke*
  15. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Ohhh dread the almighty mods!!(and now my chances of being banned have increased:p: )

    Nice one #iR@..see I never went off seriously though I'm going to stop posting here..keep writing..
  16. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i agree with angel ..but jo bhi hai i can think from ur side even ...good peom
    purani skirt and daant main taar
    vo labhi chootiyaan banana baar baar......nostalgia
  17. #iR@


    ^ thxxx :)

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