Sataa Kar Maafi Mangna Accha Lagta Hai...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Jul 1, 2005.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Tujh ko ji bhar kar sataana badaa acha lagta hai
    Sataa kar phir maafi maangna badaa acha lagta hai

    Aur bhi acchi lagti hai teri nazar ghousse main
    ghurkar tera mujh ko dekhna badaa acha lagta hai…

    Achi lagti hai teri kaali bindiya paseene ke beech
    moti tere maathe ke nihaarna badaa accha lagta hai…

    Tere gaal lagte hain komal gulaabi pankhouri jeise
    Rukh par surkhi ka eisse aana badaa acha lagta hai…

    Laali tere honthon ki acchi lagti hai laal gulaabon se
    Danton tale tera labh dabana badaa acha lagta hai…

    Ghataa se bhi ache lagte hain tere kamar tak ghesu
    tera hum se peeth ghoumana badaa acha lagta hai…

    Sooraj ki kiran se bhi acchi lagti hai teri muskaan
    Manaane par tera muskuraana badaa acha lagta hai…

    Acha lagta hai tera ‘Amanush’ ko sataakar hansana
    Muskaane ke baad tera sharmana badaa acha lagta hai…
     
  2. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    man gud going reps for u!!
     
  3. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks...Somendra! Do keep coming with your encouragement...!
     
  4. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    sure if u keep coming up wid gud poetry!!
    lolz......... :p: :p:
     
  5. Punnu

    Punnu New Member

    good one Amanush...i hv read ur previous poems too they r gud dude....u r a born poet..reps for u.Keep it up
     
  6. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    So...take a glance at take care of my moon...Somendra!Or if you prefer hindi ones,I'll post some soon...thik hai?

    See you soon...Take care

    :)
     
  7. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Hi,Punnu...!Thanks for being a regular reader of my poems...!A born poet...I don't know...!But all night I dream of poems...(really :))

    Take good care of yourself...ok?
     
  8. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    i prefer hindi one's!!
    take care of my moon .....i'll c!!
     
  9. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for telling me your preference...Somendra!

    I've posted...'Ajnabi Dost'! Hope you will appreciate!

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  10. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    c ya in the 'ajnabi dost' thread!! :cool:
     

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