roz roz ..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Jan 2, 2008.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    badi jindagi main aksar
    uthte hain din ye keh kar
    uff roz roz jeena ye roz roz soona...

    kuch mil gaya to kush hain nahi mila to dhalkar
    ye roz roz milna ye roz roz khona...

    kahen bhi to kyaa kahenge lmabi hain saari baatain
    ye roz kuch na hona, unn roz roz hona...

    dikti nahi jururat apnoo ko bhi abb apni
    kehti hai bas tanhiyi, tum roz roz aaoo na...

    badi jindagi main aksar
    uthte hain din ye keh kar
    uff roz roz jeena ye roz roz soona...
     
  2. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    Good Try Keep It Up
     
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    hey.. how come u wrote simple poem.. its nt ur style..
    btw its good
     

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