Roog

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Feb 4, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

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    Title : Roog

    ye shayari ek roog hai, aur jab se hai ye laga
    bas phiturr dhoondhata hai, har phal-safa mera

    haalat ye hai ki masoom si-ek-jo kal gazal dikhi
    anjaan sa khud appne bagal se gujar gaya...

    sab uun shuru huaa tha, jab unn se keh na sake the
    par vo aaj bhi mil jaaye, to kuch keh na sakoonga...

    itni baar chodne ki kasam kaa chuuka hoon dost
    ki kasmoon ne mil ke ek naya sher likh diya..

    ye shayari ek roog hai, aur jab se hai ye laga
    bas phiturr dhoondhata hai, har phal-safa mera

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    read only if u have a lot of time(i use to sleep in my grammer classes in school so read the idea)....
    " i dont belive that poetry is confined to the art of phrasing in a way or style or anything u call for the sake of noun.....but even situations r poetic..humerous...meaning full....i remember a poem by a very good poet

    chipkali Gandhi ji ki tasveer ke peechee se nikali...
    ek patinge ko lapka aur phir gandhi ji ke tasveer ke pchee chali gayii.....

    now its just a situation no phrases but realise how much this 1 sitation says

    An incident happned to me when i was in Goa ...their i joined a dancing class(bas aise hi ek friend ke kehne par) vaha ek ladkii thi bolo to katrina kaif jaise looks...(i lie only in professinal matters and no 1 knows me here :)) konkani brahmins r really good looking......this dance was walls or valls 1 of the ball room dance yaar.....i use to go thir after office hrs to Don Bosco school so was mostly sweting ( bygod rooz AXE lagata thabut goa is tooo humid) so this happned (i said app to vo bhi app hi kehti thi..varna to vaha sab tutu karteen hain)...while dancing..inches close yaar dance instructor humesha kehta tha come closer....

    ME :- app rooj perfume lagati hain...
    she:- nahi, app ki vajah se lagana padta hai...any problem
    ME :- nahi, accha lagta hai...............................appko
    She:- mujhe bhi + SMILE (very imp )

    abhi, their can be many meanings of this smile
    u remove the smile
    its a laugh
    shy smile
    coy smile
    but i took the best one and beacame HAPPY ;)
    hansoo mat...next day she waited 4 me for 15 minutes..... :rule:

    ya so point is can we post such small but poetic situations here...what do u ppl say ?
     
  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    :)aap acha likhte hai..

    liked the line
    "haalat ye hai ki masoom si-ek-jo kal gazal dikhi
    anjaan sa khud appne bagal se gujar gaya..."


    PS- guys or girls konkani bramhins are quite good looking:)
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    app kehti hain to accha hi hooga

    i never like this happning to me...

    "haalat ye hai ki masoom si-ek-jo kal gazal dikhi
    anjaan sa khud appne bagal se gujar gaya..."

    PS: app konkani ho kyaa ???
     
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Nope..i'm not a konkani...:)
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    yes konkani brahimins r good looking.....goa main to jitni bhi kudiyaan dekhi sab 80 % taka-tak thi i belive sun-sand and salt makes them sizzing slippery and seductive....kuch to asar hota hi hai place ka..apni punjabi kudiaan dhek lo shaadi se pehle ferrari and baad mein seedha TRUCK....hahaha
     
  6. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    can you please provide us with glossary for some uncommon or urdu-hindi words...so that non-hindi speakers can understand and appreciate better...
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    that will not help cause i distort the meanings here ....actually put them in contexts which they r not generally used in......so if common menings r inferred, u will not get the logic correct.....and common words r really common..yaar yahi sooch kar bahut kuch nahi post karta ki kaun samjhega....abhi iss vali main bhi problems hain then frm now onwards only english stuff ..desi tharra bandh.....but in the british language even i am too complicated soooo what is the solution....hmmm....ok foolish humour will be posted i feel every 1 can enjoy that..hahaha
     

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