responsibility....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Mar 9, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    nice thoughts rohit...
     
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Nice thoughts?
    @rohit, as always, again and again, the theme is striking, but if only you could work with the language well enough to create visual imagery, this poem would be amazing. I'm afraid, at this point, you just lack the skills to potray a situation using words........you need to work on that pronto.
     

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