Resonance - New original

Resonance
https://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=655512

V1:
Touch the dust
With rain on my finger
The mirror cracked and fell
The memories still linger
Images abound
Night's fabric as it frays
The deeper shades
Colours seeping through the grey

Ch:
A waking dream,
I'm walking the hallways of my mind
Round and round in spirals
I can hear the song in my ears playing
The melodies
They're calling out to me, they're
Saying

V2:
Dawn breaks
The radiance climbs
As ripples touch the edge
Troubled waters still with time
A distant bell tolls
A mist hanging in the air
Silence resonates
Vibrant in despair

Ch:
The bitter sun
The shadows seem to run and hide
Fading like old scars
I can hear the song in my ears playing
The melodies
They're calling out to me, they're
Saying

Ch:
The waterfall
The rocks I see far down below
Diving into depths unknown
I can hear the song in my ears playing
The melodies
They're calling out to me, they're
Saying

Recorded in one evening, on a macbook mic, so please pardon the quality.
I eq'd and mastered as best possible.
Drums and bass are Garageband instruments.

Washburn WI64D, Zoom 707II, Laney 30W

 

excellent track....... no too catchy but........... but listened to it a couple of times.... originals are always tougher.......

the acoustic in the beginning should be slightly cleaner.... more acousitc sounding if i may add......

and the bass line is goooooood!!!

keep going man.......would love to hear your future work........


cheers!
:beer:

 

Thanks.
It's not meant to be acoustic, it's clean electric, neck humbucker.
I'll try and record a real bass whenever my bassy gets back.

There will definitely be more coming, I'll try and put stuff up whenever possible.

 

Very, very well done man! Its done very professional, my compliments to you man, good music and good vocals aswell.
I think the vocals should sounding alot better with some effects added, some delay, a bit of reverb etc., but that just my suggestion!

Take care and keep posting man!

 

Thanks for your feedback! I'll play around with some effects and see if it works for me.

 

Great job man... Keep up the gud work, all the best...
M eager to hear more frm you...