Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by apurbajd, Feb 3, 2006.

  1. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    Oke.. heres another silly attempt by me :cool: .... read at your own risk ;)

    So I am on it again
    sitting at this dark corner
    talking to the silence
    trying to figure out the reasons...

    reasons, they are strange
    reasons, they are all powerful
    reasons, they are cruel
    reasons, I fail to reason

    reasons you had yours
    when you said you were mine
    reasons you had yours
    when you said goodbye

    reasons why did I let you go
    reasons why I thought I can live alone
    was I stubborn ,or was I brave
    then why sometimes I weep alone ..

    reasons that contradict always
    reasons sometimes so illusive
    and here I am on it again
    sitting at this dark corner
    venturing into the past once again..
    staring at each and every face (and they look so lifeless!)
    trying to feel that moment and the time
    and all these, to find out the reasons why.

    Comments plz..........
    nimisha likes this.
  2. Petunia

    Petunia terminally dorky

    i think im gnna be dreaming "reasons" tonite. :grin:

    Imma little confused as to whats going on tho. And i know that you can DEFINITELY do better than this, dude.
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    o my!!..and you said you suck at poetry!!

    this is much better than the crap i write..
    i dont think it needs any correction..
    its good..Apu:) (thats wat i'm gonna call you hence)
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Reasons r straight
    reasons r clear
    if u didnt want them to reason u
    waht can they do dear .....

    nice effort
  5. #iR@


    COME ON MAN! u rite soo well.... GOOD JOB! :)
  6. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    @Petunia u knw wat? even I dreamt reasons last nite :p: thnx for reading ...

    @Bubbly ... thnx a ton dear(well u dont write crap! I find them better than my stuff).. btw u can call me Apu... thats my nickname actually.... :)

    @madhuresh thnx man! nice lines there ....

    @#iR .... thanx dear.... I am feeling like writing one more :p:
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    ya sure.. go ahead n write one more..
    coz this one was good... next one might be great....
  8. #iR@


    ^xactly wat she said
  9. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^Thnx nimmo :) ..... that means a lot to me coming 4m a poet like you .......
  10. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    See now you have a good enough "REASON" to write again :)
    Keep going :beer:
  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    awe Apurba....such a shweet way of expressing ur confusion...good poem. & same pinch for being such a confused
  12. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    If there's anything i HATE it's a self condescending person.......
  13. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    @Knight_ki_gf thnx yaar ....

    @Garima ....thnx for the nice words ..... and pinch? dukhta hain yaar :annoyed:

    @d_ist_urb_ed ..... off topic :p:

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