Ray Of Hope

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by ronnieanand, Oct 22, 2005.

  1. ronnieanand

    ronnieanand n00bier th@n th0u

    This one's kinda nice. At least I loved it. By the way, it's my own, not some copied thing.

    Ray Of Hope
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    Amidst the dark clouds
    of Uncertainity

    Shines a faint light
    of Hope

    Is it you My Love

    Take me with you
    Take me to the world
    I never knew.
     
    ronnieanand, Oct 22, 2005
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  2. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    ^^^:RollLol: .....thats the shortest poem of all times!
    good content!
     
    rocking_devil, Oct 23, 2005
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  3. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    Wow ..........
     
    jekyll, Oct 24, 2005
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  4. ronnieanand

    ronnieanand n00bier th@n th0u

    Jekyll read my others too. One's called Dead Phoenix and the other one is Lost Innocence.
     
    ronnieanand, Oct 24, 2005
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  5. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    READ ,,,

    and posted some darned commetns to :p:

    LMAO
     
    jekyll, Oct 24, 2005
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  6. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Nice one...
     
    esgallindeion, Oct 24, 2005
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