kya be maani si zindagi hai meri Na hawa hai na khushbu hai kis haal main hum jeete hai aey logo ! kya aap ko andaaza hai koi Na dekhti hai suraj ki kirney na payi kabhi chand ki roshni ek ghutan si hoti hai yaha na sada sunta hai koi lagti hai zindagi ek bad dua si ab phir bhi ye saans kyu ruk ti nahi hai be jurm aseer hu main ek aur ye zindaan hai koi kya kabhi rihayi na hogi meri kya yahi kabr banegi meri ye kis sabab main main hu yaha zara mujhe samjaye koi es faqeh kashi ke alam main koi to dilasa de jaye virani dhasti hai mujhko In hotho pe tabassum le aaye koi Aseer --- > Qaidi / Prisoner Zindaan ---- > Prison /Qaid Khana Faqah --- > Fast / Bhukh..Pyas Tabassum --- > Smile
app ne accha attempt kiya hai abhi main rep nahi kar sakta ....varna jaroor karta ...not for the thoughts (they r childish) but for the selection of words... i dont know how old ur, but this is not the real state of a lonley persona.... "Dhoop jagane aayi subhe, choote roshandaan se ..Raat be intazaar hi soo gayi thi, bagal main kal bhi " roshandaan:- small window kinda smaal opning in walls but much higher on wall
Thnx guys .. ye sirf ek adna si koshish thi.. es se pehle main kabhi koi mozu pe nahi likha siwai pyar ke es liye shayad main itni gehrayo main nahi ja payi :hbr: magar agli baar gehrai se likhne ki koshish karungi
