pyar hai..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by avi.singh, Mar 6, 2009.

  1. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    hi frnds
    i m posting my first thread here cause i like this place very interesting
    i composed this poem last night, plz share with me how do U find my this work
    it starts from here.. :p

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    pyar hai tumse mujhe, pyar hai, haan pyar hai

    teri hansi khilti kali
    nazuk se honth, *shabnam dhali
    bheege si hai teri chandni
    tu raag hai ya raagni

    kaise kahun shabdon main tujhe
    tu pari door duniya ki kahin
    har ahat pe meethi dhun hai
    har geet main paun tumko hi

    *AAjim si ho gayi ye jindgi
    jabse hua tera dedar hai
    pyar hai tumse mujhe , pyar hai, haan pyar hai

    rakh loon chipake sada k liye
    paa loon jo, tumko kahin,
    doob jaoun agosh main tere
    kwahish iske siwa ab kuch nahin

    baar baar pooche ye dil
    kya tumko kuch karar hai
    ya bekrar tum bhi ho,
    aur tumhain bhi intzaar hai

    pyar hai tumse mujhe, kya tumhai bhi mujse pyar hai...


    *shabnam-dew
    *Aajim-helpless

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  2. pyaar pyaar
     
  3. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    i m sorry tht i spelt something wrong...

    but anyone didn't comnt as yet...
     
  4. ppl generally dont comment on good things ...alls intrusted in extrimities...good poem although ...keep posting
     
  5. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    thx a lot for appreciating me..
     
  6. good night
     
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @avisingh
    thats 1 rilly nice poem, lovely!
     
  8. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    thx horsie....:)
     

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