hi frnds i m posting my first thread here cause i like this place very interesting i composed this poem last night, plz share with me how do U find my this work it starts from here.. -------------- pyar hai tumse mujhe, pyar hai, haan pyar hai teri hansi khilti kali nazuk se honth, *shabnam dhali bheege si hai teri chandni tu raag hai ya raagni kaise kahun shabdon main tujhe tu pari door duniya ki kahin har ahat pe meethi dhun hai har geet main paun tumko hi *AAjim si ho gayi ye jindgi jabse hua tera dedar hai pyar hai tumse mujhe , pyar hai, haan pyar hai rakh loon chipake sada k liye paa loon jo, tumko kahin, doob jaoun agosh main tere kwahish iske siwa ab kuch nahin baar baar pooche ye dil kya tumko kuch karar hai ya bekrar tum bhi ho, aur tumhain bhi intzaar hai pyar hai tumse mujhe, kya tumhai bhi mujse pyar hai... *shabnam-dew *Aajim-helpless ------------------------------ ------
ppl generally dont comment on good things ...alls intrusted in extrimities...good poem although ...keep posting
