Pyaar....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by anum324, Mar 2, 2006.

  1. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    Uff...yeh zindagi bhi kitni kam hai,
    Ek tujhe ...bas tujhe pyaar karne ke liye.

    Tujhe dhoondti hain har waqt meri nazren,
    Ek baar phir...tera deedar karne ke liye.

    Dekhte hi tujhe machalta hai mera dil,
    Apni muhabbat ka izhaar karne ke liya.

    Sunkar achaanak tere kadmon ki aahat,
    Tadapne lagti hun tera sparsh paane ke liye.

    Jab thaam lete ho apni baahon mein mujhe
    Pighalne lagti hun teri garmahat paane ke liye.

    Aarzoo is dil -e - nadan ki hameshaa yahi hai,
    Har janam tu hi mile dil mein basaane ke liye.


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    I hope most of us agree that love is one beautiful thing on this earth.:dance:
     
  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Akanksha....kissi ne mujhe kal parso hi yaad dilaya tha...ki office kaam karne ke liye hota hai..poem likhne ke liye nahiiii....:p: :p:

    Nice poem buddy....:beer:
     
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    & yeah,,,,,i do agree that Love is the most beautiful thing on this earth but it can leave ugly memories behind....anyway...that doesn't matter....chaand me bhi to daag hai....so we cant expect anythng to b perfect...when evn God is not perfect ....right???
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    first thing first ur way of expression is beautiful ....*taliyaan*
    and love is beautiful > i dont know
    but ya some girls r ;) .....actually love is greedy love is hungry for more love ....jus arrange hungary ...y r u hung 'cause v o love..
     
  5. Broken_heart

    Broken_heart New Member

    Nice work !!!yep i bleiv love is the best thing on earth...4 sum it leaves bad memories....Well not bad memories whilst we livin those moments its beautiful but the day it goes wrong we call it bad memories!But i jus look back thinking of them as lovely memories which were not meant 2 b 4ever!Neway.....Evry1 has diff xpriances in luv so we all hv diff views!:)
     
  6. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Bohot hi nazakat se aapne apni arzu o ko shayri ki shakl diya...
    good good..
    aur haa
    pyar jaisa aur koi ehsaas nahi hai
    pyar se khubsurat koi jazbaat nahi hai
    Ye wo nayab tohfa hai rab ka
    jis ki sifat bayaa karne ko mere paas alfaaz nahi hai
     
  7. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Akansha!
    if thats your name girl..it reflects in your poem;)

    i liked it.
     

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