its good not great not ready for stage performance the vocals.. much better than my vocals i must add , but u need carnatic or hhindustani vocal training, u will get much better rapidly given the skills u already have. the song rminds me of another song.. pacha pala poovu.. ilayaraja used the same template for both i guess.
googly: nalla paNNi irukkeenga. vaazththukkaL. Three areas to improve: (1) your tamil pronunciation. la / La - idhu konjam thiruththik koLLungaL. (2) shruthi anga inga vilagudhu. innum konjam muyaRchi edukkalaam. (3) Bhaavam - the song is simple but not plain or bland. It has immense bhaavam. Hence you need to put some bhaavam in there. Oru chinna example : vaaznaaL dhORum - this line is not just "pa.....dapamagari". there is a beautiful continuity between "pa...da" phrase. Similarly there is a beatuiful continuity between "gari". From ga to ri it glides gently. idhai konjam observe paNNi improve seyyunga. varappOgum nalla muyaRchigaLukku en vaazththukkaL.
thank you guys for your feedback... i will work on the points.. i could definetly use a good singer for the recordings any volunteers... what y'all think about the music and the recording parts...? The vocal part was recorded using a PC mic (?!?!?)... so that explains the noise... i used my casio for the drums and the instruments... and taal maala for the tabla part..
I can try to see if I keep up with the suggestions I gave you. Upload the karaoke in yousendit and give the link here.
here is the link... please bear with the bad drums rhythm in the start... it was all keyed in using my casio...!?!? https://s28.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3UYBU5RYOFWSR3A9XZN3XAACR9
