poems and poetic thoughts....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sonali, Sep 15, 2004.

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  1. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    False Ideas:

    Soul mates, born to bind
    Soul mates, born to meet
    Lovers, made to be
    Walks away, drifts away
    Time is evil, a crook
    Kills love, kills innocence
    Years pass by, soul mates reunite
    Love rebirths, time is beaten
    Love, exists to overcome
  2. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Great work essi and sonali. Keep 'em coming.
  3. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    Misty Mirror

    A dark scrawny face stared at me.
    Scathed by sins, burdened by crimes,
    paralyzed by fear, wrinkled by age,
    staring at me with wondrous gaze.

    The face had no sorrow, only shame,
    having played life like a game.
    All pleasures once belonged to the face,
    but was only left with utter disgrace.

    I saw repentance in its eyes,
    and that couldn’t be hidden by disguise.
    It wanted to live life all over again,
    but had nothing left but pain.

    The mist began to clear
    out of my mind’s mirror.
    Realization was like thunder in the sky.
    I fell to my knees, and began to cry.
  4. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    great job maverick

  5. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    thnx sonali, glad u liked it.
  6. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Nice one... I love the first stanza...

    An Uneasy Night

    A wail I heard unto the night
    Thunderous shriek, a chilling bite
    Whose doom is it, I wonder here
    "Not mine, nor thine, oh husband dear
    Sleep now tight and be not thee so afraid
    Some things at night art better left unsaid.
    Lest evil come unbidden from the evil woods
    Lest evil come and taint all those that once were good."
    And yet I wonder as I count my sheep
    It might be a newborn babe's gentle weep
    And yet I know I am but mistaken
    In my guilty thoughts I am still unshaken
    The stranger - he comes, he draws ever nearer
    To me, a pawn, a mere standard bearer.
    The dawn I greet with my bloodshot eyes
    The day, she greets me to my own demise.
  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Amazing poems:shock: If only i could write half as well.....................
  8. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Well... unless u write, u wont get better.
  9. Venus

    Venus New Member

    Wow, u guys write really well, keep them cuming.............:)
  10. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Thanks venus, how about contributing yourself?
  11. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Good job essi, but one thing. Lest should always be followed by "should". Apart from that its very good, like all of ur other stuff.
  12. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Well, I usually throw grammar out of the window while writing a poem... I just don't bother... But i'll keep in mind... thanks..
  13. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    Here's another one...

    Lost Faith

    I have lost my faith,
    spewing hatred outta every breath,
    a crusader for a cause,
    murdering everyone who’s not one of us.

    Kill the man, rape the woman,
    don’t spare anyone.
    Maybe I’ll repent later,
    contemplating this senseless massacre.

    I have lost my faith,
    spewing hatred outta every breath,
    My mind is not my own,
    compassion to me is so unknown.

    We wanted to create heaven,
    but we created hell instead,
    Houses and pyres burning,
    oh, what price have I paid ?

    There, I saw a child in the ruins,
    the blood on its face washed by tears.
    I couldn’t help but try,
    I knew I’d break down and cry.

    Mercy! Mercy! Mercy!
    screamed the child’s eyes.
    The only thing I had to do,
    the only thing I could do
    was turn back and go home.
  14. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Nice... sounds more like a heavy metal song's lyrics...
  15. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Good job maveric! I liked it.

    Hey, one thing mods. Do we still have to post our lyrics in this thread? Can't we make individual threads in the forum? Easier to browse that way.And that would also make the forum look much more complete.
  16. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    We were just about to make the announcement, tejas... This thread is closed, and until further notice please post individual threads for your poems.
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