poem...title..zindagi

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Oct 5, 2005.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    hi to all,

    posting new poetry..titled as zindagi

    ghum na sahi,khusiyan to mile.
    dushman kayi,dost kam hi mile
    waqt apne saath kushnaseebi to laya
    varna siskiyan hi chupate chale

    apno se bhi,kya gila
    haanste hue sabhi se mila
    baant leta unke ghum
    par phir se mein tanha akela

    roz shaam yaadein le aati
    purani si zindagani aur low ki baati
    kab bujh jaaye,iski khabar nahi
    bedili hi sahi,zindagi khichti chali jaati


    hope some responses will be there ...

    rohit
     
  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Nice work Rohit...
    its nice you write well, both in Hindi and English...

    Do you know Urdu aswell?:)
     
  3. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    thanks..bubbly martini.........i feel the god's grace that with imaginative flow of thoughts the words do evolve...i admire your words..

    modesty in thoughts is neccessary.........all poems are wriiten by me at random...not that i have wriiten it and posting in the thread

    thanks again

    rohit
     
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    nice work again Rohit.....hope to see some more...soon :)
     
  5. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    good work dude......i somehow read n understood it.....u know.....i cant aptly read hindi poems!
     

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