Past/present

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Feb 21, 2006.

  1. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    ok now... i really don't know if i should even call this a poem... but still am calling it one...:eek:: find it weird but meaningful at the same time... hope u guys like it... LIKE ALWAYS... COMMENTS R ALWAYS WELCOMED!!!!! :cool: here goes...

     PAST / PRESENT


    Dreams…
    …shattered
    Questions…
    …unanswered
    Hearts…
    …broken
    Hopes…
    …lost
    Smiles…
    …vanished
    Defeat…
    …predicted

    Life…regained

    Expectations…
    …achieved
    Wounds…
    …healed
    Believes…
    …strengthened
    Hands…
    …joined
    Victory…
    attained!

    THANKS A LOT FOR READING!:) don't forget to comment on it!
     
  2. nimitr

    nimitr New Member

    reminds me of the song from Gupt ... goes something like this ..... khamoshiyan...tanhaiyan ...mushkil bada ye pyaar hai ..

    words speak everything ..... well done Gandi B...... ooops sorry u said u dont like being called Gandi Bachi :p: ..... so nice work #iR@ ....... :)
     
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Somewhat different.

    Hira that was something different......all these words seems to be a clear indicator of the turmoil u r going thru.
     
  4. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ nimitr... thanks! :) comments always welcomed!

    @ walk_alone... thanks a lot! nahi yaar... not going through any turmoil i just don't know why i am ritting such rebellious sort of poems these days! :eek:: thanks a lot! :)
     
  5. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    just 2 replies...:cry1:
     

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