Pass Aana

To someone special in this world...

Talash mein teri, guzri hai zindagi meri
Doondh na paya, is jahan mein kahi
us jahan mein nahi hai mujh to ab yakeen
Pyaar ka jaana deta huin vasta yaheen

o mere jaana pass aana
pass aake door na jaana
o mere jaana...

dodta lahu nason mein chaahe sirf tujh
saanse bhi meri choona chaaye ab tujh
tu jo na mile mujh ko, mar jaaon ga yaheen
zinda phir bhi raahegi, aashiki meri yaheen

o mere jaana pass aana
pass aake door na jaana
o mere jaana...

Comments janta! kya vo mujhe meligi :

 

good one with simple words. shall turn into a good song perhaps.

 

Can i make a song out of this????

 

I mean no offense if i use ya lyrics....sounds too good to me :beer:

 

main to kehta hoon...milegii...

na-mile to tu mil, keh de apna haale dil
apni cheej utaale aur keh de, ghar pe bhijva dena bill

 

Thanks a lot people!

I have written this peice purely for song purpose. I was composing it while designing its lyrics.

Eb#, Db# and B are the chords I am using.

Feel free to use these lyrics to compose your own song.

All the best!

 

^well.... g0oD LUc|<! btw... nice poem man! :beer:

 

Gud one Amit...
Lagta hai... pyaar ka nasha aapne bhi chak liya hai...

Keep writing...

REgards,
Zooom..!!

 

Thanks @Zoom. This forum and all its members is my insperation.

 

Amit ... listen dude... if u ll keep writing such good stuff at such a frequency... which is like every alternate day... i cant rep ya so often yaar !!
Well written !!

 

Uhmm Copuld you try and record it??

It'll turn out to be a lovely composition>

 

thanks gf and uj

 

Bohot hi aacha likha hai aapne :rock:

Ijazat aap de to tareef main aap ki kuch hum farmaye
pyaar Muhabbat aap de to aapke dil ke thoda kareeb hum aaye
Aap ke khatim ban ke aapke har khwaish ko apnaye
Shikayat gar aap kare to kahi yeh dil ki dhadkan tham na jaye...

 

thanks sweetie