Own composition- please check it out!

Own composition- please check it out! (recording added)

Hey guys, here is the first hindi song that i wrote and composed. Am still a beginner so request all you veterans to remember that!!

Don't know the guitar language enough to describe how i play the song (Hint-lots of gaps between the lines while playing just the chords) but will let you guys explore i guess, if you take the trouble. Thanks!

Strumming Pattern DUDUD-UUU-DU

intro- (D)

(D) aaj mein kahaan hoon
(Bm) inn vaadiyon mein
(A) sochh mein raha hoon

(D)aaj mein khada hoon
(Bm)inn patharon pe..he
(A)dekh mein raha hoon

(G) ki kal jo aayega
(F#m) saath layega
(G) teri nishaaniyaan
(F#m) meherbaniyaan

(A)e-he…(Em)o-ho…(Bm)a-haaa (D)

(D) ghar chod mein chala hoon
(Bm) teri hi khoj mein
(A) dhoond phir raha hoon

(D)aur mein roya hoon
(Bm) dhoop chaon mein
(A) jaan mein raha hoon

(G) ki kal jo aayega
(F#m) saath layega
(G) teri nishaaniyaan
(F#m) meherbaniyaan

(A) inn bazaaron mein
(Em) inn fizayon mein
(Bm) mann ki meri inn
(Bm)gehri gufaon mein

(A) e-he…(Em)o-ho…(Bm)a-haaa

Outro
(D)slide down to (E) slide up to (Dsus2)

 

Post a recording, it'll be helpful.

 

the songs nice, but it would be better if u post a recording .

 

good work m8
a recording can help

 

thanks guys! will try and do that...keep the faith...

 

recording!!

Hey guys, please check out the recording of my composition posted earlier. Its quite an amateur-ish effort as I used my digicam to record this

thanks for litening!!

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=664026

 

oye dude , your voice is quite good , but u have a imporve u r guitar chords playing , u r playing some extra bits , ...........keep it up

 

bueatiful vocals

 

thnks Vish and Jimmy for your kind words!!