' Ouss Ki Maangein...! '

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Nov 16, 2006.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Amaavas ko Aasmaan se mahtaab maangti hai
    Registaan se wo do chaar goulaab maangti hai

    Har shab hamein chain ki nind sone deti nahin
    Aur in ankhon se suhaane khwaab maangti hai

    Jab khoushi ko gale lagaane ki chaah jaagti hai
    Tabhi mere ansooon ka wo sailaab maangti hai

    Jahan tak yaad hai ouss ne sirf sitam dhaaya hai
    Na jaane ab kin inaayaton ka hisaab maangti hai

    Kalam aur kaagaz se jab saare rishte tor liyaa to
    humse apni shaayri ka nayaa kitaab maangti hai

    Rouh ko mere nan.ge nachaa kar mehfilon main
    Humse wo sharm o hayaa ka hijaab maangti hai

    Paimaana choDne ka paimaan kissi se dilwa kar
    Tanhaayi main choupke se sharaab maangti hai

    Jaante houe ki koyi seema nahin apni nadaani ki
    besabab mushkil sawalon ka jawaab maangti hai

    Hairaan na ho, Jaanam! Zikr tera nahin hai yahan
    Wo hayaat hai jo humse kuch sawaab maangti hai

    Amanush

    :)
     
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  2. wah wah...
     
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    good one...yaar u simplify ur spellings a bit..as it makes tuff to comprehend..like>

    ouss=uss
    khoushi=khushi
    choupke=chupke

    a lil hard time in understanding..anyways keep postin
     
  4. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    Amazing...wonderful....it is simply awesome......feelingsn emotions very well framed and composed...

    Reps for you
     
  5. loyal

    loyal New Member

    Bahut khoob !!,

    keep posting !!
     
  6. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    as usual...amazing!!!
    again cant sit without repping ya
     
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i feel better ho sakta tha...its some thoughts becoem evident before time in the flow then it dosent strikes that hard as it culd have..... "may be i am wrong"...all in all good poetry
     
  8. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!


    arre its Mauritius' people's style of writing...! :p: ( Just kidding )

    I'll try to improve, Vini Ji...!

    Thanks for appreciating and keep encouraging, ok...?

    Amanush

    :)
     
  9. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Wah waahi ke liye bahut shukriya, Monica Ji...!

    Yunhi saath dete rahiyega...!

    Amanush

    :)
     
  10. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for the nice comments, Anum Ji...!

    Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...?

    Amanush

    :)
     
  11. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Tah-e-dil se daad kabul kiya hai humne, Loyal Ji...!

    Keep encouraging and take care

    Amanush

    :)
     
  12. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for appreciating and do keep encouraging...!

    :)
     
  13. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Agli baar behtar banaane ki koshish kareinge hum...!
    Tippani dene ke liye dhanyavaad


    :)
     

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