Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by tejas, Jan 30, 2005.

  1. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Once so strong, has turned so fragile
    All that hold are these worn out memories
    Of times long gone, but still remembered
    But reminiscences are not what i choose to live with

    Lay down, your choice and opinion
    Promise to value them, for all their worth
    Takes time, to device denials
    Clear conscience but mind's a pacifier

    Waste no time, wondering 'where lies the fault?'
    Bow down instead, and let us re-structure
    Define the uniqueness, yet retain the coherence
    Learning from the failure, stronger now than ever

    This hence, we shouldn't let this tumble down
    For it speaks the end of all good things to come
    Prepared to compromise anything to keep this alive
    Lest the worst should compromise......"us".​

    Okay, this is really not my style, but i had to get this out. Didnt put much thought into it, its very raw. Just what i was feeling. Anyway, hope u guys like it.

    ┬ęTejas, 2005
  2. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    It's simply the truth that nobody can deny.

    Well, really a very nice one, tejas.

    But is it copyrighted?
  3. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Hehe, not really, just like adding that. :p: Looks cool.

    Anyway, thanks sanjay. Glad u liked it.
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Another masterpiece by the poet:) Excellent.
  5. drunken_wisdom

    drunken_wisdom WiSeCrAcKeR

    hey tejas...u actually used "otherside"...like i said before..good job...
  6. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Thanks to both of you. And yeah DW(not dark wing) i did go with ur suggestion.
  7. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    very poetic indeed...
  8. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    Cool Stuff Tejas.. the last line was really too cool
  9. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Thanks both of you.

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