Only If U Were Here!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Aug 10, 2005.

  1. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    those tears that stream down everynite,
    those thoughts that echo in my mind,
    those words that fail to be heard,
    would have meant something,
    ONLY if u were here for me,
    those sleepless nites,
    those grim memories,
    would only have meant something,
    IF u were here with me,
    ONLY if u were here to support me,
    only if u were here with me!

    do comment on this........ Criticism IS WELCOMED!!!!!!
     
    zoomingrocket, rizaaj and cYpHeR like this.
  2. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    nice stuff #ir@....reps for u
     
  3. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hey nice one....
     
  4. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned



    hey nice #iR@ but don't worry dear ... I AM HERE ONLY... I AM WITH YOU ONLY.. and if u like I WILL BE HERE ONLY FOR U.. dear.. PLEASE DON"T CRY... I hate TEARS...


    vishwa :cool: sometimes naughty
     
  5. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ cypher & screwdriver THANKS A LOT!

    @ VISHWA MAN........... mmmmmmmmmm......... thanks but no thanks really!!!!!!!!! LOL..........
    thanks for the appreciation u guys! ;)
     
  6. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    good lyrics ir!nice thought there!keep 'em up!
     
  7. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned


    Ok... I have something for #iR@.....


    I wish I were tear...

    Then I wud have born in ur eyes...

    Lived on ur cheeks..

    and Died on ur Lips..

    But if u were my tear..

    I wud never cry...

    Because I wud never wana lose u... Dear..




    vishwa :cool: sometimes poetic..
     
  8. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    Well.. this thread is gettin a bit offtopic..wotsay? :grin:

    Hira..if thats what ur username means #ir@ !.. a nice shot at poetry there..eh! :)

    tahda!!
     
  9. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Hey sssssslayer ... sometimes try to write sumthing .. i guess u will really sound POETIC..


    :cool:
     
  10. mr singh

    mr singh New Member

    nice mod, ssslayer.
    i think it really sums up the true feel of the lyrics by vishwa.
    i think the initial lyrics by #IR@ were of reasonable quality, nothing 2 special in my opinion.
     
  11. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    Shut Up Everyone!!!!!!!!!

    PPL............. THANKS A LOT ALL OF U FOR REPLYING TO THIS THREAD BUT U GUYS R MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ASKED FOR RESPONSE NOT SOME STUPID TALK OVER SOME CRICUS ****!!!!!!!!!!!! if u guys r soooooo desperate to talk about this ZOO ****...... GO MAKE A NEW THREAD! :mad:

    ______________________________
    FREAKS!
     
  12. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    @ssslayer - if u keep bugging the mods to close each n every thread they may close you as well!:p:
     
  13. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Very nice...I like it!

    :)
     
  14. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ mr. singh and @amanush........ thanks A LOT u guys! i really appreciate your comments! :beer:
     
  15. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    and waht about my repss??? to u ?? no thanx for that ??? :mad:
     
  16. shak

    shak Harrr!

    oyeeee ... thats goood one

    by the way @hira ... like your stuff aswell ....
     
  17. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Thanks Sharukh.. atleast there r some people in IGT who admire nice things.. instead of commenting on them..
     
  18. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    SSSLAYER dude.............. THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS A LOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :nw:
     
  19. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    *smirk*
    do i detect a sarcasm here?
     
  20. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ sharukh...... THANKS DUDE>........

    @ ssslayer........ no way dude........ NO SARCASM! really thanks a lot for the reps!!!!!:D
     

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