One Tear...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by zoomingrocket, Feb 23, 2005.

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  1. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    I dont wipe the single tear...
    As it wud follow with few more...

    Hardly can i see tat single tear;
    How can u expect me to see more??

    Cant avoid tat one tear of urs...
    But atleast i can get u more SMILES!

    I go because, i have to...
    But, i come back again and always...and forever;
    To see your UNIQUE Smile!

    A Pain i too suffer; seldom expressable!
    But a remedy to it; a big SMILE of urs!

    So keep SMILING!

  2. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    wow..dat's was really good zoomboy...nice one dude...
  3. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    :)I like it...I like it a lot! :)
  4. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    by the way,would you mind giving me some feedback on some of my poems/lyrics? :p:
  5. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    Zoom, still having trouble with a special someone? Btw very nice poem :)
  6. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Nice poem Zoom, like always.
  7. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    @lord_neo: Yeah....yeah SOMEONE Very SPECIAL!!! Hehehe, Controversial! :)

    Anyways...thanks everyone for appreciating this little piece of work!

  8. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    nice one zoom...
  9. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    hey zoom, never thought U write so well. that's a great poem, dude.
    And the title "One Tear" is really wonderful. Can I send it to my beloved?
  10. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    @Sanjay: Well i have been an occassional writer since a long time now... And write only when i actually pass through that situation!
    It would be my pleasure to see more SMILES around the world reading that poem...!!
    So feel free to send it your beloved & ask her, never forget SMILING!
    Cos, thats the fuel which keeps our Heart running!!

  11. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Thanks a lot Zoom. U are great and U keep rocking :rockon:
    And I'm gonna mail my beloved right now.
  12. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    nice and simple I like it, hope we could see more smiles on people around the world today!!!good one zoom.
  13. gnr311982

    gnr311982 New Member

    hey good one dear frnd. very true .
    great work.
  14. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Niiiceee work Zoom!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):)
  15. nadish

    nadish Active Member

    That 1 just touched the strings of my heart.
  16. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Just gone through this one again...and revived few memories....

  17. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^good that u went thru this poem...the new members like me got to kno that therz one more good poet here on IGT....nice work dude....
    have u stopped writing or u hv stopped posting ur poems....neva seen any from u since the time m here??
    anyway, hope evrythng is fine now....with that special SOME1 :grin: :rockon:
  18. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    i know zoom is a rockin poet :grin:

    this one is really nice :)
  19. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    its a lovely poem dear..

    Tk care
    and Smile! --->:)
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