its been long since i posted somethin here..twas last year in May i guess...hmm some people asked so im posting atlast..though i myself think, i could've done better : ..but anyways, take it as it is now its What if God was one of us, originally sung by Joan Osbourne https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=438386&songID=5117283 ps-i've recorded in lower scale i.e, "Em",original is F#m i guess :think:
VINI DI !!!! I wish u sung it a bit louder! cos ur voice is nice! or may be kept the mic a bit closer to u. Nevertheless, guitaring is really good.
Very nice Vini, i agree with Ankur_Scorpio, guitaring was very good but the vocals could be a little louder and a little hint, try to use some effects for the vocals, it will sounds much better, but anyway, you did a good job!
the guitar gets a bit boring for me after a while.. the rhythm, that is. it's quite an easy song to sing, so i think u can do MUCH better.. ur voice sounds nice though!
I agree with what trish said. Also, your guitar sounds kinda stale...the rhythm should be bouncier (IMO) or perhaps plucked. I think you should challenge yourself a little more...and post more frequently. You're sounding suppressed and scared here with both your voice and guitar(though not unpleasant).
i havent heard the original version so i cant compare the two songs but i think ur guitaring was quite good voice was decent....
sorry for the inaudible bit..actually the overlapping done to accomodate the lead..spoils the overall audio quality otherwise i think originally volume was ok..so next time i'll avoid putting in leads. thanks for ur suggestions..everyone!