This is a song that I wrote. Title: One among the crowd.. Tune-I am musically illiterate I woke up in the mornin, sun shinin thro` my window Looked at the face in the mirror, arched my li`il eyebrow Was it me or some other face that I saw on the road like the million other guys drivin the same ol` ford.. (Chorus) Am I one among the crowd Do i really feel so proud Do I have to be just like the million other guys Participating in the rat race, eating french fries I wore the pressed grey suit, crossing the mean street A million other people with me, I looked like dead meat Cell phone, shoes, tie , perfume were all the same I was in the unending journey towards fame Everybody was nobody but the same A million other people like me, My excuses are becoming lame (Chorus) Am I one among the crowd Do i really feel so proud Do I have to be just like the million other guys Participating in the rat race, eating french fries When can I be different from the rest When can I call myself the best When will I livemy life with zest When will ever pass this test When will ever, in peace, rest (Chorus) Am I one among the crowd Do i really feel so proud Do I have to be just like the million other guys Participating in the rat race, eating french fries
very nice...i really liked it a lot.got to read sumthin of this sorts after a long time and then..quite uncommon theme..expressed with ease..good going keep posting..reps
Liked it... I wore the pressed grey suit, crossing the mean street A million other people with me, I looked like dead meat Cell phone, shoes, tie , perfume were all the same I was in the unending journey towards fame Everybody was nobody but the same A million other people like me, My excuses are becoming lame Good work.I know it was a song but try not to focus much on rhyming.. "When can I be different from the rest When can I call myself the best When will I livemy life with zest When will ever pass this test When will ever, in peace, rest" You can completely neglect that comment though,coz its a good song and that is just a minor technical flaw..
