\\\ Oh Happiness! \\\

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by vini, Apr 8, 2006.

  1. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    Oh Happiness!​

    Oh Happiness, you are like frost on the windscreen
    Which people wipe to let in the scorching sunbeams

    We go on a quest, searching for your traces
    But who knows you dwell very near.......On our faces

    You sure are dear to all and who says you dont subsist

    I see you in every child's giggle
    I see you in the eyes of a newly born's mother
    I see you in the breads for which poor long
    I see you in the notes of a joyous song

    So Lets rise and rejoice for lo now its known where happiness is found

    You dont have to wait for it
    Nor you need to look around..

    A thought always used to pinch me that why most of the poems are sad, dark and dismal (not that i dont write sad ones)l. So i thought of writing this poem as an ode to Happiness!

    Yippee!! :grin:
    ps- i wrote this poem yesterday but didnt plan to post it here but im really ecstatic right now as my resultz out(and ofcourse i have passed ;) )..so i decided to post it!
  2. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinng the happy happy happy happy happy happy song, SING the happy happy happy happy happy HAPPY happy soooooooong(this poem reminded me of the gummy bears)
  3. #iR@


    ^ awww.... gummy bears r soo cute!

    @ vini...amazing!!! :)
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    lol..gruffi and the rest of lineage wid rhyming names..hmm? :grin:
    whatever makes u remind of them? @ uj
  5. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Simple and true lines...
    Beautiful poem..
    Keep it up..

  6. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Oh Vini .. Thou art muh Happiness .. within Thou lies muh delight!


    Well writtne :)
  7. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    sahi hai..
  8. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    @zoom+notting hill+madhu

  9. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    oyeee..party time on passiingg...and ye always be happy as ur poem.....
  10. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    :):):):)...very sweet poem...i am happy-happy...:)
  11. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    hehe...thankyou! :grin:
  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    great to see such a great poem from my fav mod here... at such a great occasion...

    when i'm gonna get party??for ur results??
  13. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :banana: yaay Party time....he he...Congratulations Vini...for passing ;) i hope u passed with a gr88 margin ...lol...
    Nice poem indeed .... describes our quest for happiness...the more we search for it the more we become sad....so its better to absorb evrythng that comes with a smile evn when u r not happy....cos life does gv a chance to evryone to mk the changes...its just that we hv to look around and b courageous enuf to tk a step to mk that change....
    *phew* enuf of lecture from a sad poetess...:eek::
    Reps for u.....
  14. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member


    really good definition

    like the way u play with the words n for the part

    I see you in every child's giggle
    I see you in the eyes of a newly born's mother
    I see you in the breads for which poor long
    I see you in the notes of a joyous song

    u need to get ur eyes checked ((lol am sorry just kidding , no hard feelings) actually i like that part most

    reps if it permits :)

    ps congrats for ur academic success :beer:
  15. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    thankyou nimmo dearest!

    play with words?..im a lil confused now...need to get my eyes checked?
    more confused ..but thankyou! :)

    @garrulous_garima ;)
    party?? sure thing!!...pick me up from my home..lets go to the best restaurant in town and then lets go dutch..muhaha :Laughing: heh..kidding ofcourse!...im glad that u liked my work..dont be a sad poetess anymore babes..u also write a "happy poem"..i've taken the lead..let garima be the next!..nahi jokes apart! i think we guys should give an ode to happiness as well..hamesha dukh bhari poems...hmmph
  16. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :&quot;(

    niceee.. i liked it. swt poem. & congrats. cheers!
  17. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    @subhro bhaiya
    " hee :grin: "
  18. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :&quot;(

    @vinnnii diddddiiiii
    "heeee :grin: "

    ye.. lets spam :banana:
  19. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    :rock:GUMMIE BEARS :rock:​

    ehmm....yeh nice poem....no reps though im sorry...
  20. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    uff @gummie bears!
    never mind @reps
    thanx @nice poem


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