obey your master

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Nirvanafreak, Feb 28, 2005.

  1. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Servants of darkness,gather in the night,
    Angels of darkness,demons of light,
    Demons gathering,made to kill,
    So many souls,so much blood to spill,
    Inhaling your breath,stealing your pride,
    Enjoying every tear you cried,
    Two territories,heaven and hell,
    They don’t have a heart,they’re just a mere shell,
    Reflections of their masters,obeying their rules,
    Trying to be like them,the mindless fools…
  2. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    It's a bit of a short poem,but I didn't have a lot of inspiration...
  3. nadish

    nadish Active Member

    Not bad at all.
  4. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    really great stuff, the name reminds me of metallicas master of puppets, but the content is diffrent and is really good.
  5. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    hey,thnx :)
  6. neologik

    neologik New Member

    cool. i came in here thinking u had just ripped of master of puppets. but glad i was wrong
  7. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    once agen a great one:)
  8. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    hehe,tnx again...:) I just found a good book publisher who I'll send some of my poems ;)

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