o mere dil ke chain cover

hey frnds dis is my first ever recording..so plz be partial and plzz gimme ur comments so as i cd improve..thanku...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kp-AKF_Mxz0

 

Good performance man, you own a good voice as you can sing well too but there are some things to be improved.
The Sur for example, you are out of Sur at places, so try to improve that. The Taal isn't good too, always try to sing in the rhythm, a very good help is, tap your foot in the rhythm while playing and/or singing, this will help you alot to stay in the rhythm. I'm not saying this to dishearten you or something like that, i hope you understand, but when singing a song, the Sur and Taal have to be oke, so you have to work on these things.
Overall a good work man, keep going and take care!!!

 

hey thanks a lot man..i also think so that u r rite...i wd surely consider all ur suggestions...