None yet... read on tho'

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Asmodeus, Jan 8, 2005.

  1. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    Hey... I wrote this like some time back... got no title for it... lesse... ne1 with any suggestions as to what kind of song it would be? Meanin' say, heavy, really heavy or really really heavy??? :rock:

    I see the steeples on my side
    Passed a mosque on my right
    Left a temple way behind
    Ahead is the road I need to take

    Where there is no religion
    No one to talk bout rites
    They may not be atheists
    Though some do Satan’s name take

    Did you know who you were?
    At the time of your birth?
    Now that you’ve grown up
    You have to see through only one faith

    I know there is someone out there
    Who did all what we see
    He may not even be human
    He certainly wasn’t created by myth

    So why is it that you still be screaming’?
    About discrimination or war?
    Leave that nutshell way behind
    And come to know the truths

    Think about it, who man was
    No fight over who’s right or wrong
    Just one force to bind us all
    Just one set of truths

    I don’t care if you be Christian
    I don’t care if you a Sikh
    You may believe in the Quoran
    For me you just who you are

    I don’t care if you a Hindu
    Or a peace seeking Buddhist
    You may be a Jain or Zoroast, but
    For me you just who you are

    P.S. Visit my blog if ya can... I\'ve got ****loads posted there, me thinks
  2. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    Why dontcha name it 'Religion' ? great poem, man...
  3. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Great, Strong stuff. I read this long ago, but for some reason didnt post about it. Sorry about that. It has a great message. Keep it up and u may want to call it, "Faith", but thats a bit overdone. So...let me think...i'll get back to you.
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Excellent, very nice stuff Asmodeus.....
  5. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    Whoa! Jus saying that, huh??? Thanks for the congrrats man!
  6. dharmatma

    dharmatma Banned

    i think u have put in some effort in it.... so u wudnt like anyone critizing it.
    my view (in a nutshell).... if i were a fundamentalist, i would continue what i do even after reading it again and again, say a million times. i know what ur trying to mean here, but that something 'aesthetic' is absent, clearly.
  7. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    Yeah, without a doubt... i get what u tryin to say... I'll try workin on that

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