Now i didnt wanna post this but too many ppl have been asking why i havent come up with something new so here it is... No More My dark angel, you are not Yet my heart pounds everytime I hear your voice All this while, with myself I fought And now, I've won as I fight no more I was completely drunk on pain You see why I would just shut off at times? I was drenched in the cold, dark rain But now, it is cold and dark no more Not knowing the power you hold You completely changed my inner world You moved mountains within my soul Depressed, I am no more I feel a passion unlike ever before I hope you have realised how much you mean to me To such strong desires, you opened the door The smile on my face, is fake no more
a happy-happy poem built on darkness.......i liked it very much... gald to see one more b-e-a-utiful poem from my favourite poetess :nw:
ur poems r dark really......but man i do lovee them to read.......as usual,u must be tired now readin the same THE POEM IS AWESOME frm me...........and congrats on ur reputation of 2 dots...... psst :: one more to my file now
seems that u hv written a poem bout wat u r goin thru rute now.....too good... it ws a bit dark initially....but by the end the darkness ws gone...& i liked reading that 'happy' poem by u...for a change hope it keeps going like this :grin:
^^which is why i didnt wanna post it, i thought ppl might be disappointed... but posted it anyway! thnx though..
