No More

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Jan 24, 2006.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Now i didnt wanna post this but too many ppl have been asking why i havent come up with something new so here it is...

    No More

    My dark angel, you are not
    Yet my heart pounds everytime I hear your voice
    All this while, with myself I fought
    And now, I've won as I fight no more

    I was completely drunk on pain
    You see why I would just shut off at times?
    I was drenched in the cold, dark rain
    But now, it is cold and dark no more

    Not knowing the power you hold
    You completely changed my inner world
    You moved mountains within my soul
    Depressed, I am no more

    I feel a passion unlike ever before
    I hope you have realised how much you mean to me
    To such strong desires, you opened the door
    The smile on my face, is fake no more
    Hardik and ElysiaN like this.
  2. ElysiaN

    ElysiaN d@Rk\/\/@|\|deReR

    :beer: gr8 work...reps for u.... :rockon:
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    nice work...
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    awesome as always..
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    @madhuresh & nimmo.. thanks!!!
  7. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    a happy-happy poem built on darkness.......i liked it very much...:):)
    gald to see one more b-e-a-utiful poem from my favourite poetess :nw:
  8. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    didnt think of it that way before, but yeah! that's what it is!

    thanks :)
  9. #iR@


    good job cryptic! :)
  10. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    nicely done as usual.. good work :beer:
  11. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ur poems r dark really......but man i do lovee them to usual,u must be tired now readin the same THE POEM IS AWESOME frm me...........and congrats on ur reputation of 2 dots......

    psst :: one more to my file now
  12. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    thnx again guys!

    @abhi.. i was trying to write a somewhat happy poem!
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  13. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    seems that u hv written a poem bout wat u r goin thru rute now.....too good...
    it ws a bit dark initially....but by the end the darkness ws gone...& i liked reading that 'happy' poem by u...for a change ;) hope it keeps going like this :grin:
  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^^:grin: thanks :grin:

  15. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    nice poem dear..
    Stay Happy..

  16. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    great one!! say
  17. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    thnx martina, i want u to be happy too! a hug frm me too :)

    @ansh.. thnx bhai :grin:
  18. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    I liked it but not as much as your "depressive" stuff. (honest opinion).
  19. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^which is why i didnt wanna post it, i thought ppl might be disappointed... but posted it anyway!

    thnx though..
  20. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    I liked it. Dont get that wrong. :beer: And people ARE liking it.

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