people writting erotic poetries here... so i thought ..even i shud give it a try... n this just came in my mind in seconds... eroticness is not in words..but in imagination... khaamosh baat madh-hosh raat milan ki aans nazaron ki pyaas tere badhte kadam tham gaye se hum sharmaana meraa paas aana teraa meri zuki nigaahen tu bhar raha hai aahen saanso ki garmiyaan baahon ke darmiyaan labon ka takrra jaana baahon me jakrra jaana ke too gaye jo hum loot gaye sanam tere hothon ke sitam kabhi hote naa kamm ke tu josh mein aur madh-hosh main aanchal ka dhalanaa dil ka sambhalanaa julfe bikhri huyi si surat nikhari huyi si behekati najarr lachakti kamar taaron ke tejj se phoolon ki sejj pe kuch silsile jo ye dil mile... -------------------- comments plz.....
^^now THAT is erotic....:grin: when it comes to hindi poetry,there's no one like you here hats off nimisha....
even i dont mind hardik.... : but i care the ijjat of IGT... dont want any censored stuff here...! ....
Ek line aur to aage lokho huzur... apan.. taaron ke tejj se phoolon ki sejj pe vali line ko visualise kar rahe hain...abhi agee ka sene kyaa hai..
on request..i complete my song.... btw i knew..this was gonna happen sitaron ki tej se... phoolon ke sej pe... yaar ke sparsh me.. pyaar ke harsh me... unkahi si aahate dilon ki raahate betaabiyaa, atkeliyaa na khatm jalim ki paheliyaa uthake maujon ka luft thamsa ja raha kuch waqt badan ki bijaliyaa kayamat ki ujaliyaan aankho ka jhuk sa jaana ehsaanson me ruk sa jaana aurr..... kuch nazdeekiyaan....... haan bass....nazdeekiyaan.... ------------------------------------ i still say eroticness is not in words...its in feelings..if u can feel this....
^^oooh.. very nice hey.. why do u write 'z' for 'jh'... makes it sound like a north-eastern person is sayin it
watever u like to say me..... different people..different opinion..... n i can hear criticism too... (though it wont be much encouraging)
nice one nimisha ...something for you........ shabdon ki mala me moti pirona koi aapse sikhe..... har ehsaas ko alfaj dena bhi aaphi se sikhe..... hum jaise hazaaron kadardan milenge likhne waleko.. bass shayari ki baarikiyan koi aapse sikhe....
: : thanks vikram.... hum kya jaane shayari ki barikon ko jis din hum shayari likh sake..hum ginn rahe hai unn tarikhon ko...
nazdeekiyaan... want u to see complete poem in one look... so posting it again as whole.... khaamosh baat madh-hosh raat milan ki aans nazaron ki pyaas tere badhte kadam tham gaye se hum sharmaana meraa paas aana teraa meri zuki nigaahen tu bhar raha hai aahen saanso ki garmiyaan baahon ke darmiyaan labon ka takrra jaana baahon me jakrra jaana ke too gaye jo hum loot gaye sanam tere hothon ke sitam kabhi hote naa kamm ke tu josh mein aur madh-hosh main aanchal ka dhalanaa dil ka sambhalanaa julfe bikhri huyi si surat nikhari huyi si behekati najarr lachakti kamar taaron ke tejj se phoolon ki sejj pe yaar ke sparsh me pyaar ke harsh me unkahi si aahate dilon ki raahate betaabiyaa, atkeliyaa na khatm jalim ki paheliyaa uthaake maujon ka luft tham sa ja raha kuch waqt badan ki bijaliyaan kayamat ki ujaliyaan aankhon ka ruk saa jaana ehsaason me ruk sa jaana aurr... kuch nazdeekiyaan.... haan...bass nazdeekiyaan
