' NadaaN Humsa Milna Hai Mushkil...! ' ( Ghazal )

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Jan 6, 2012.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    MehmaaN heiN ankhoN ki meri aate rahe jaate rahe
    Paani kabhi to khoon kabhi motee inheiN kehte rahe

    Dekha tha khwaab kaNch ka paala jisse palkoN tale
    AnkhoN ko Das gaya jo tuTa ansoo bahe behte rahe

    Saaqi yuN kyuN zulmi bani iss riNd ko ruswaa kiyaa
    HothoN se shishaa chiin liya rakeeb mere peete rahe

    Kiss jurm ki saathi sazaa dete rahe mujhe umbr bhar
    Baksha hai dil ko ghaav kayi waqt unheiN seete rahe

    Afsos hai bas itna sanam, aap hamein samajh na sake
    Zindaa heiN hum kinn ke liye, kiss ke liye jeete rahe

    Iss main koyi shaq hi nahin nadaaN humsa milna hai Mushkil
    Kissi ki wafaa ke naam ki kal tak kasam khaate rahe


    Amanush

    :)
     
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Good use of language, but reading coloured script, and the mid-word case-changes were difficult.
    Overall, it was worth the effort it took to read, but still my scope of this language is less, and I couldn't make out your third
    stanza..If you could explain.

    Good work, keep it up. Gives a feeling this is penned by a pro.
     
  3. achha tha ...!!

    kabhi kabhi i feel ye urdu ke kuch words have been repeated soo many times in poetries i have read ki ... even new poems i read seems to be old ... i feel the fresheness in any piece is due to the words one uses in the poem
     
  4. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks so much for appreciating, Sir...! I adore green colour & the mid-word case changes are genuine devanagri to roman script...! About the third stanza, here's the meaning :
    Why so much cruelty bar girl, you have humiliated this drunkard
    From my lips you snatched the bottle whereas my rivals kept on drinking

    take care, ok...?
     
  5. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Thanks for appreciating...! Isse Jagjit Singh Ji & Chitra Singh Ji ki ghazal " Dekha tujhe sochaa tujhe chaaha tujhe pooja tujhe Maanga khudaa se raat din tere siwa kuch bhi nahin " ke tarz par gungunaayeinge to shaayad aap ko accha lage...!

    Take care, ok...?
     

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