my very first hindi poem

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by theguitaristofm, Dec 18, 2004.

  1. hi dudes well i've written something hope u like it its my first hidi poem

    my poem

    teri yeh surat
    aur yeh muskurahat
    maan ki yeh shararat
    hey kudrat
    kaisi hain yeh musibat
    kahi yeh to nahi hain mohabat

    nigahoin ki yeh harkat
    dil ki yeh ghabrahat
    tum se hain ye to shikayat
    hey kudrat
    kaisi hain yah musibat
    kahi yeh to nahi hain mohabat

    its quite short but its my first one :rule:
  2. bangobango

    bangobango Banned

    nice one did not know that u were also a poet
  3. hey guys how was it the poem?????????????
    @bangobango well i've so many hidden talents also u'll c very soon with my guitar also
  4. gautam_njoy

    gautam_njoy New Member

    hey dat was cool...
    wil surely like to listen to ur guitaring talent soon
  5. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice poet theguitaristofm, good try really. The number of poets in IGT are increasing day by day, shame i cant be a part of this community.
  6. thnx dude well u wil c my new poems soooooon
  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Looking forward to them:)
  8. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    hey Guitaristofm do you mind if i make out a song of it. not for commercial purposes...
    any ways the decision is urs

    plz do reply
  9. no prob but u've got to sing it when we meet online ok u can use it well yesterday i was really inspired n made out this poem dont know what took me really the words just came by themselve n when i posted it i added a few lines more
    glad that u like it a lot well copyright remains mine u can use it rizaaj if its not commercial
  10. @gautum thnx dude hey u r from india i thought from mts like me
  11. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    thanx man, i will surely try to make best out of it.....

    thanx again
  12. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    nice one dude
  13. @desipride thnx dude
  14. itsme_amit

    itsme_amit New Member

    it was a good one....
    hope to hear more from you....
  15. bangobango

    bangobango Banned

    another poetic lover is born????????????????
  16. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Really it's quite nice. But the word "musibat", I think if U use another word instead of musibat it would be much better. I don't know I may be wrong.........
  17. @sanjay well musibat coz at times love can b a realy head ache for one lolz
  18. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    nice on... man...
  19. @ams thnx will post my other poems later very busy for time being

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