hi dudes well i've written something hope u like it its my first hidi poem my poem teri yeh surat aur yeh muskurahat maan ki yeh shararat hey kudrat kaisi hain yeh musibat kahi yeh to nahi hain mohabat nigahoin ki yeh harkat dil ki yeh ghabrahat tum se hain ye to shikayat hey kudrat kaisi hain yah musibat kahi yeh to nahi hain mohabat its quite short but its my first one :rule:
hey guys how was it the poem????????????? @bangobango well i've so many hidden talents also u'll c very soon with my guitar also
Nice poet theguitaristofm, good try really. The number of poets in IGT are increasing day by day, shame i cant be a part of this community.
hey Guitaristofm do you mind if i make out a song of it. not for commercial purposes... any ways the decision is urs plz do reply
no prob but u've got to sing it when we meet online ok u can use it well yesterday i was really inspired n made out this poem dont know what took me really the words just came by themselve n when i posted it i added a few lines more glad that u like it a lot well copyright remains mine u can use it rizaaj if its not commercial
Really it's quite nice. But the word "musibat", I think if U use another word instead of musibat it would be much better. I don't know I may be wrong.........
