MY :: THE SCHOOL GAL (( good poem))

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by abhimanjrekar, Jan 24, 2006.

  1. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<---- title suggets ,don go for other meaning... :p: thoughts came ,i wrote.........ab u opened this post, to don go without reading... ;)


    school dayz,
    what lovely they wer,
    i liked a girl,
    who had long hair.

    we used to eat togehter,
    with me eatin most of the part,
    the poor gal used to stare at me,
    as if to tear me apart.

    homeworks we had many,
    nevertheless i did few,
    she used to do it for me,
    wich was nothin new.

    each time we were together,
    her mama would be around,
    she would come running,
    even at the slightest sound. :rock:

    how i miss her,
    today shez not me,
    she mite be up ther somewhere,
    Playing around heavens little trees....

    (( sometimes i do like poems like an 8 ys old...hmm..have to do somethin now :eek:: ))
    the_wizard likes this.
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    the funny part was how u urself said it's a good poem in the title :RollLol:

  3. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ hmmm...know wht i had put sensible....then changed to good...
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    hey dude
    last stanza the "with" is missing

    nice poem:) ..ur trying for the cute poems patent?
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    but gotta admit, it's kinda cute.. :grin:

    like a chhota sa bachha wrote it.. LOL
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    guys grew up bit late... i think he is making it lot late....
    but ya..its a cute one!!!
  8. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    hmm..seriously i wasnt expectin any response for this..yuhi daal diya..okies frm now on il try to write such chota cute poems only..........ya forgot to put the WITH bubbly....give me some idea for the next think on it.....ny title.......dont tell me doodhwala,postman and all...hehehe........
  9. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    nostalgic :eek::


    sugesstions for the nxt poem....write about some gal in ur college, or colony....mere samne wali khidki mein type
  10. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    hmm......koi nahi saala open air ahead of my house..and no cuties inmy college.....
  11. #iR@


    lol...... cute poem
  12. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    yeah...cute and "good" :RollLol:

    so that girl was u only??
    do u have schizophrenia? :shock:
  13. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ oops i know i forgot the im workin on a poem wich includes all u members whom i know...wait for it....
  14. vini

    vini Repeat Offender


    roll over that poem boi!!
  15. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    How about Tumchi Mumbai for the next poem..
    thats only if you havent written about it yet :)
  16. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    okies done..tumchi mumbai..befor thth...souls of writin it ....

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