MY :: STRANGER ON THE DOOR ( sad one.....i guess )

donno wht made me write this....can be sort of sad...jus wrote it and put here....wonder if ya people like it....

STRANGER ON THE DOOR

On the count of four,
I heard a knock on the door,
Curious,i looked to see,
There was a stranger on the door.


Cops they were,
Saying something to my mom i couldnt hear,
What has gone wrong now?
My mind filled up with fear...


I saw my mom cry,
I din knew the reason why,
They brought someone wrapped in white,
I couldnt hold my nerves tight.


Shocked at what i see,
The cloth removed and it was me,
I had forgot i wasnt anymore,
And thts why,
There was the stranger on the door....

 

i mean how u got that idea.. one word superb...

 

^^ thx..donno re...started writin with the title and it just came out.....

 

fantastic abhi ... i cant believe this is the same abhi who is so well known for the crap he writes .... this one was gr88 .....

 

haha..thx man..ya i can write sometimes...and i write only for u people who r ther to read my poems regularly....i don mind even if they r few as long as they r ther but..thx.....and don worry ..the crap is on the way..hehe......

 

Abhi...m struggling for words now...that ws an awesome theme on which u wrote.....
good to see that change in u

 

thx...u know wht i consider myself as a flash poet.....bole to whatever thought comes to my mind within tht particular instant i jus write it down..i don think much on a poem.....also this poem jus went on in a flow...this is my best as far as i can say..thx again....

 

nice one...words playing hide and seek with me to describe the poem.

 

good very good bahuut acchaaaaaaa...kmaal ho gaya dhoti phaat gayi rummal ho gaya.........

 

^^ haha..thx ...

 

@Abhi, edit your posts, remove the damn smileys and correct the spellings, it'll do the poem a world of good. One of your better poems, i have to say.

 

^^ ok man...thx for it...

 

^^i'm gonna have to agree...

do that n it'll be good

 

yo i did....

 

!!!!!!!!!

 

^^ hey bhagwan,.........hehe...** goes to buy grammar book **

 

cool

hey its a very different concept from the usual, pretty nice

 

You can write well if you make up your mind
not neccessary you Have to write crap to know whats "not-crap"
..
i repeat your one big Chhupa Rustom....i liked the poem..!..

 

where u stole from that concept from?
was it your brain behind it...??
hard to believe...
read your last poems also...(serioz ones) ..u r going great..

the thought is awesome.. n so the poem is good...

 

^^ yaarrrr....STOLE.....nahiiiiiiiii.........itz my originall........kabhi kabhi i find my brains.....

@ bubbly, thx again....chupa rustam nahi hua main...apun open rustam.....