my recording : pichle saat dino revised

do check my revised version for pichle saat din...i tried 2 play in the same rythm/style as in the movie during their reunion
https://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=576135

 

this revised version kinda sounds like grand piano playing instead of the guitar.....esp the intro......

one thing i've noticed in this cover is that you've seem to have lost the feeling......you're just singing for the heck of it........put some more emotion.....this is raw song....its not supposed to be technical......and put some more energy into it......

im sure you sang this song not because you were totally emmersed in this song but just because you wanted to revise the previous verson.....listen to the songs a few times and then completely immerse yourself and then try to cover this song...

im not saying this cover is bad.......in fact it is much better than your previous recording! im just pointing out how better it can be.....

but excellent voice and sur! keep going!

cheers!
:beer:

 

Like this version more than your previous version!
Good guitaring and good vocals aswell!
Keep going and take care man!!!

 

i liked it
sounds almost like the acoustic version they sing in that practice room
some faults here n thr..but verrrrrry minor
overall.. u gotta get reps
all the best man