My Penance.

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by walk_alone, Jan 16, 2006.

  1. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Wish we had never met,
    Had we met,
    Wish u had never tied me
    with your silken ties
    or wen u nourished me with ur smiles.
    Wish u had never left me
    in mamoth desert of silence and lonliness.

    when we parted
    how strangely did we fell apart,
    not a look,not a word,
    beast in me shouted
    "force her,posses her"
    but cultured coward smiled.
    you slowly drifted away
    and i could only sigh.

    (for the only one I ever loved)
    nimisha, aeg0 and CrYpTiC_angel like this.
  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    *sigh*.....the onli thing we cud do when in Love...& cant help it.
    Nice poem:beer:
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Thxs garima...
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    feelings expressed wonderfully... nice poem

    reps to u!
  5. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    who DO u love??
    (srry personal questi0on :grin:)
  6. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    Thxs Cryptics words like yours(including reps) keep me motivated...and as far as knowing the person is concerned....its very very very personal....
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  7. #iR@


    very well expressed! :) reps for u...
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    THXS gandi bachchi....:)
  9. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    reviving an old thread ... one of the very first
  10. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    nice! not artistic...but cute...
    these expressions only come from possessed
  11. suprita

    suprita New Member

    nyc... sweet n simple...
  12. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    it's kinda sweet n clearly conveys ur mental condition
  13. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    this is 2nd poem I wrote and I was 17 then I guess
  14. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    i started writing poems when i ws 13 :)
    n when i read them now...i feel so silly lol

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