My Little Star...Up There !

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Jan 17, 2006.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Up there in the universe,
    among the myriads of stars,
    mine also is visible …
    it is so sad, it is melancholic,
    its rays reflect an icy anguish,
    its twinkles tremble in uncertainty,
    its beams have become miserable sparks.

    It wants to blow itself out
    It doesn’t want to be anymore
    a star radiant and fulgurant,
    It’s deaf to the cheerful comments
    of its celestial fellows…
    but wants to tumble down
    in a void , dark and without bottom…
    as to put an end
    to the evil that derive
    from an unattainable dream.

    Oh…! Come on , my Starlet,
    don't pick it up this way…
    In your heart you can make also space
    for some hope that in you has to stay
    as a trembling flame…
    that never allows itself to extinguish
    and you have to overpower
    even the strongest blow
    of a disastrous cyclone...


    Amanush...

    :)
     
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  2. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    very nicely done.... reps for u! :)
     
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    Thats a great work!!

    loved:
    however...it was great but not extraordinary like ur other poems!!
    keep posting!

    reps for u! :)
     
  4. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^nice one...........
     
  5. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    @ #iR@ Thanks so much for appreciating and for the reps :)

    @ vini Thanks for your nice comments and also for reps...! I will try my very best soon...! :)

    @ Apurbajd Thanks for liking this one too...:)

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  6. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    fantastic job....keep it up...
     

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