Nisha ki kaalima ko tumne ujjwalit kar diya mishrit gam va madiraashq ko tumne pavitrit kar diya shadd rituein bhi beet gayin parantu tumne mujhe wahin kendrit kar diya nihsankoch nigudh baat main kaise spasht karun lokan netra se ye nirupaskrit raaz main kaise nasht karun? twadeeya hui ye meri saansein pakshpaati hui ye meri raat lashkar mein bhi aati rahin priyatam mujhe tumhari yaad
its not just tough and uncommon words which make a poem is it ? good thing is u learned some words keep it up
I am not regular in this forum.neither a good lyricist..written some stuff.....but yeah..sometimes i like reading good stuff... Your feelings..are so nice...but the words are so difficult that message will not reach to everyone...try using simple words......sometimes great feelings can be said in simple words... keep posting...good efforts
