my incomplete poem..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Oct 18, 2010.

  1. Sleep with me my incomplete poem
    we share the same taste the same fragrance
    let them be confused and detached & disgusted
    we can play with then, with the chaos, the disturbance

    Im not like the gods who write and sleep
    i will weave you and wear you, you will define my tense

    when the brown winds will choke my eyes my ears
    the dust of time will fill all my sense
    i will open ur knots u will reach ur epitome
    then fall like words, bounce on the land make streams of sentence

    no one would read and that’s what we want
    cause u hate to be a story, i don’t need remembrance..
  2. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    a short n sweet tribute to poetry :) i liked it :)
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    i read it... Nice... Liked it!
  4. unit4echy

    unit4echy New Member

    quite a good read..
  5. thanks...will try and write some more..

    and something good
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    dis is nice..!

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