my hindi poem...tanhai

hi to all..


posting the hindi poem..titled as Tanhai

dard bhi to hua, tere jaane se
par sochata hun ,kyun ho gaya ek anjaane se
aaj phir se aankhen nam si hui,
wohi shaam aur tanhai pehchane se.

tum agar ek bar aate,phir chale jaate
bewajah hi sahi kuch to kahe jaate
par umra beeti intezaar mein,
bas ek baar to jaane ke liye aate.

tasvir chupaye dil mein keh raha hoon khud se
tanhaiyon mein umre basar hogi ab ke
saath agar ab bhi tum do,
ghum saare hi door ho jaate ab se..

hope to see the responses.......in some way

rohit

 

tanhai.. ur words.. express it well.. good work..

 

good one

 

Nice work dude..
liked the last stanza the most

 

yet again...nice work from u Rohit....:beer: