My first poem/song..

OH YES I DO!
and now i can finally say with confidence that this poem aint funny at all! ... i think its really pretty ..

 

^^^^thanx Shahrukh....my efforts paid :rule:

 

umm :think: how many dollars/rupees?

 

garima...let your pen speak always ..

rohit

 

First try ...??? too good...doesn't look like a first try

 

Thanx guys....
@rohit...got ur point
@jekyll...evrythng cannot b measured with rupees/dollors
@Rude_gal....thanx yaar

 

hey .. i am in love with urdu poetry ...

something in urdu,.....!!!

suna reha hai yeh samaaa
suni suni si daastan...

 

pukaarte hai door se
woh kafiley bahaar ke
bikhar gaye hain rang se
kisi ke intezaar ke
lehar lehar ke hoth per
wafaa ki hain kehaaniyan....

 

okie ... but then there has to be some way to measure ..

 

^^^he finally understood my poem...:grin: any more clarification???

 

yeah some clarifications ... i didnt understand ... :

 

OMG....how can some1 b that dumb <lolz> dont tk it to heart
now....he dint understand the meaning of some words in the poem...so he cudnt understand the poem in full...i told him wat those words meant...& he understood the poem...that gave me some relief...that he understood the poem..&the funny part is that he dint find it funny like most of the ppl here....now did u get it???

 

hey garima
nice poem.....again
i m really very impressed....
especially the way u start ur poem.... the very first two or three paragraphs....
they r really written very nicely..... awesome...
hey garima
one more thing aftr reading ur poems
" KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI "
now u tell me what should i do.....
abhi

 

^^^Abhi....find ur Tina then...(lolz)
btw....thanx yaar

 

@ garima........ CHA GYE HO,......... good job yaar..... i mean FIRST TRY ... ALLA hai! :beer:

 

^^^Shukriya :grin:

 

:think: u seem a dumbo :...& a dumbo 'loves' me :NoNo: nahi chalega....
btw, where is ur avtar gone...that was the nice one...

 

well i didnt want others to like that avatar so i took it off
this one i like better ...

 

^^^well, was talking bout the same avtar. i think i was not able to view that at that time, so i thot u changed it :

vaise even i like this one.....

 

yeah...that avtar somehow suits him. Rite...Mr. Jekyll????