my bestfrend poem

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by **Rani**, May 6, 2006.

  1. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--

    Riyadh My Eternal Love ...







    Finally it ends, my distanced journey

    After a long time being lonely

    Driving home through desert and debris

    That mirrors miserable years of me !

    .

    Then I feel on a magical rug

    As Riyadh appears through the fog

    Rain falling and clearing the picture

    Of a different and compatible mixture

    .

    Is it dawn, Riyadh, or may be a breeze

    That makes me smile, happy and pleased

    Or it might be all the changes arising

    Which shape a city and make it amazing

    .

    The moment arrives; we pass the borders

    I noticed accurate organization and order

    Arriyadh, Aljazeerah, and other publications

    With buildings, attracting us in fascination



    .

    Mamlakah, Faisaliah, what else is more

    That really captivates us door to door

    Mall here, mall there, malls every where

    Which one shall I gaze, God it’s not fair!

    .



    Great care has been taken for education

    Which is the real wealth of it’s own nation

    Jareer, Obaikan, and other Bookstores

    That spread all around, I can find no words

    .

    The greatest gift is the free healthcare

    That eases the problems of those who can’t bear

    Still, there is many a special hospitals

    For those who desiring splendor practical



    .

    Riyadh you captured my heart and soul

    Riyadh to me you equal he cities all




    And only Allah Who Watches us from above

    Knows that you are my eternal love

    .

    .

    .

    this is ma frendo poem talking about ma home town hope u like it
     
  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    liked ur hometown more than ur poem..
    good try..
     
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    vey good poem!! :nw:
    nice description

    reps for sure
     
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    LOL.. for a sec i was like "u wrote that :shock:" then i read on n realised ur frnd wrote it :grin:
     
  5. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    hi Rani,
    Tell your best frend do join IGT...he/she is good poet.

     
  6. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--



    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:annoyed:

    okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay


    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
     

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