my bestfrend poem

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by **Rani**, May 6, 2006.

  1. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--

    Riyadh My Eternal Love ...

    Finally it ends, my distanced journey

    After a long time being lonely

    Driving home through desert and debris

    That mirrors miserable years of me !


    Then I feel on a magical rug

    As Riyadh appears through the fog

    Rain falling and clearing the picture

    Of a different and compatible mixture


    Is it dawn, Riyadh, or may be a breeze

    That makes me smile, happy and pleased

    Or it might be all the changes arising

    Which shape a city and make it amazing


    The moment arrives; we pass the borders

    I noticed accurate organization and order

    Arriyadh, Aljazeerah, and other publications

    With buildings, attracting us in fascination


    Mamlakah, Faisaliah, what else is more

    That really captivates us door to door

    Mall here, mall there, malls every where

    Which one shall I gaze, God it’s not fair!


    Great care has been taken for education

    Which is the real wealth of it’s own nation

    Jareer, Obaikan, and other Bookstores

    That spread all around, I can find no words


    The greatest gift is the free healthcare

    That eases the problems of those who can’t bear

    Still, there is many a special hospitals

    For those who desiring splendor practical


    Riyadh you captured my heart and soul

    Riyadh to me you equal he cities all

    And only Allah Who Watches us from above

    Knows that you are my eternal love




    this is ma frendo poem talking about ma home town hope u like it
  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    liked ur hometown more than ur poem..
    good try..
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    vey good poem!! :nw:
    nice description

    reps for sure
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    LOL.. for a sec i was like "u wrote that :shock:" then i read on n realised ur frnd wrote it :grin:
  5. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    hi Rani,
    Tell your best frend do join IGT...he/she is good poet.

  6. **Rani**

    **Rani** --DawnyGal--




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