My 1st lyrics - Scavengers To The Core

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by pavandude, Feb 28, 2006.

  1. pavandude

    pavandude New Member

    Ok this may sound deathish which i have no intention to notate into that genre.... will keep it close to heavy [wen its notated].... but i was in Slayer mood, so i wrote up this one....

    Now there's nothing left
    How well they fill themselves
    Hunger and greed
    Can never satisfy itself

    Here he stands before me
    Not very long before he sees me
    Beside me lies the horrors subdued
    I've nothing left but life
    Waiting for myself to join my fellowmen

    Cause they are scavengers to the core
    Bloody damn scavengers

    A lone scream catches his eye
    Unknown by the unfortunate
    Thats he's still on the prowl
    I see him move away from me
    As deafening yells flood the range
    I know my turn is next

    Cause they are scavengers to the core
    Bloody damn scavengers


    yup i know its small.... but howz it for a start???
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  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Niiice, good job, you should write a song now.
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    That was great !!
    I m not a death/ heavy metal fan.. but the lyrics sure are awesome!!
    Keep writing dude!! :beer:
  4. pavandude

    pavandude New Member

    Cool guyz.... thnxx.... i apprecate. Will definitely write more with all this inspiration.
  5. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    wow....somthing different....good job...
  6. pavandude

    pavandude New Member

    thnx again man...
  7. slash_i_m

    slash_i_m Laid to Rest

    Pavan u wrote all this stuff:shock:
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  8. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    Absolutely loved it...
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  9. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good man complete it .......this is one i had on the same lines if u can relate to it .....

    Title: lord i'm simply human

    when the buzzer sounds high
    daunting thoughts and definate eyes
    no wait no resent no regrets
    no time even to analize
    new bullets old soles take a flight..

    then y do all be with me
    not jubilation but in pathos
    cause i went to kill
    or bad for bad i fought

    yes lord i'm simply human
    just another breed
    confused with emotions
    obsessed with hunger and greed ...

    lord i'm simply human
    i want to be humane
    but those who teach me how to be
    r themselves all insane ...

    lord i'm simply human
    i know this all is game
    i wear cloths but deep inside
    feel that naked shame ...

    lord i'm simply human
    nubile inoocent sole
    they all se its a blue sky
    y do i see it a hole ...
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  10. pavandude

    pavandude New Member

    @slash - ya som, i wrote all this
    @cryptic - Thnx ya.... inspired to write more
    @madhuresh - Not xactly similar, but decent lyric that... good
  11. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Do you HAVE to reply to everyone's poem with one of yours bro? :grin:
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    no but i did'nt wanted to post it :)

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