Ok this may sound deathish which i have no intention to notate into that genre.... will keep it close to heavy [wen its notated].... but i was in Slayer mood, so i wrote up this one.... Now there's nothing left How well they fill themselves Hunger and greed Can never satisfy itself Here he stands before me Not very long before he sees me Beside me lies the horrors subdued I've nothing left but life Waiting for myself to join my fellowmen Chorus: Cause they are scavengers to the core Bloody damn scavengers A lone scream catches his eye Unknown by the unfortunate Thats he's still on the prowl I see him move away from me As deafening yells flood the range I know my turn is next Chorus: Cause they are scavengers to the core Bloody damn scavengers Aaaaahhhh.......... yup i know its small.... but howz it for a start???
That was great !! I m not a death/ heavy metal fan.. but the lyrics sure are awesome!! Keep writing dude!! :beer:
good man complete it .......this is one i had on the same lines if u can relate to it ..... Title: lord i'm simply human when the buzzer sounds high daunting thoughts and definate eyes no wait no resent no regrets no time even to analize new bullets old soles take a flight.. then y do all be with me not jubilation but in pathos cause i went to kill or bad for bad i fought [chorus] yes lord i'm simply human just another breed confused with emotions obsessed with hunger and greed ... lord i'm simply human i want to be humane but those who teach me how to be r themselves all insane ... lord i'm simply human i know this all is game i wear cloths but deep inside feel that naked shame ... lord i'm simply human nubile inoocent sole they all se its a blue sky y do i see it a hole ...
@slash - ya som, i wrote all this @cryptic - Thnx ya.... inspired to write more @madhuresh - Not xactly similar, but decent lyric that... good