ek tha raja, ek thi rani un donoki jaan ho gaya pani jab se aaya neya aurat raja vulgeya rani ka bat... rani ki dimag ho geya garam zharu se pitaya raja ko damadam tab raja ka muh pe sirf ekhi naam hai raam hai ram.... mar khake raja pohoch geya hospital samzha rani ki dimag ka jhal tab jab rani aaya raja se milne raja kaha sorry aur diya ek kiss tab rani ka gaal sharam se ho geya laal.... :dance: guyz n gals plaz reply soon... :dance:
U made me smile really cute poem love it how u say "Rani aaya"..lol Nice work rizz... Keep it up.. ur hindi's good! PS:Looking forward to read more Hindi poems.
Hehehe,.. how old r u man? Its kiddish,.. n i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it!!! Awesome,... reps for u ma kiddo frnd!
lol. . made me smile for some different reasons .. it reminded me of a friend of mine in muh classes .. she's from andhra .. n doesn't know hindi properly .. "Rani aaya" type statements are typical of her .. mujhe ACHI LAGA yeh poem .. sach .. bahut ACHI LAGA !!! :
Same here... it reminds me of the way a Kannadiga frnd of mine used to spk Hindi.... it was hillarious and I always used to pull his leg for that...... but now he spks almost perfect Hindi ... bt who can 4get the good ol' days ......... nice poem though dude...reps coming ur way .........
LOL....that was funny....& ur hindi made it funnier...& if u improve ur hindi..ur poem wud b a lil less funny... so dont improve it :...give it a thot seriously btw, reps coming ur way from me too :grin:
hey all thnx 4 da reps .... u r rite i m weak in hindi but i can undrstnd it ... only cant talk properly in hindi... tnx again... i ll post my 2nd hindi poem quckly...bye...
